Briar ran. As a small boy, he was able to dodge swiftly between the hordes of people and beasts, outrunning the many guards on his tail.

Ignoring the cries and protests of various merchants, he quickly bounded onto a nearby stall, trinkets and charms clattering onto the floor beneath him, and with one great leap propelled himself through the air into an open window. Muttering a swift prayer to the gods, Briar dived into a nearby laundry pile, wrinkling his nose with disgust at the stench, and pleaded fervently that his pursuers had lost sight of him. Suddenly he stiffened and held his breath as he heard the guards pause outside the window, wincing inwardly at the nasal tone of the shopkeeper demanding justice for his damaged wares.

The guards pulled themselves through the window one by one, and Briar couldn’t help but laugh silently despite his plight; they were obviously struggling to heave their bulk through. However, this was little consolation. The town guards, as a rule, trained vigorously every day, the more trouble they had getting through the window, the bigger and stronger they’d be. He clung to the wall, burying himself deeper into the dirty clothes covering him. Briar curled up small as he heard them systematically ransack the room, drawing closer and closer to where he was concealed. His body trembled uncontrollably as the room went silent, knowing for sure the guards had seen the pile of laundry, perfect for hiding away a young lad. The silence hung in the air as Briar, still clinging to his stolen loaf, took a deep breath, believing it to be his last. He shuddered as the steely ring sliced the air, the unmistakeable sound of a sword leaving its sheath. Eyes wide with fear, he listened as the blade plunged into the clothes randomly, too scared to flee or protect himself, knowing in his heart that his best bet was to stay still, a cowards death, but a clean one. He squeezed his eyes tightly shut, waiting for the cold kiss of steel. He didn’t really have any regrets, too young to have experienced true love, no family left living or caring, Briar just wished he’d been able to eat the bread he’d fought so hard to obtain. For what seemed an eternity he waited, knowing they were still there, just wanting it to be over with by now, hoping for a clean blow to kill him instantly, not wanting to feel as the guards had their fun with him.

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  • Mervin on Feb 11, 2009

    I love it.

  • Yeti on Feb 11, 2009

    Awesome, interesting and well done story. Keep up the great work!

  • Rhii on Feb 12, 2009

    Hey Nilla,
    That’s amazing!!! Since when could you write *evils*
    Really good though!! Well done
    x

  • qwertyrobot on Feb 13, 2009

    Awesome!!!!! Pure awesome! Best story as far as picturing the action in a while.

  • bjb on Feb 15, 2009

    cool my imagination went wild good stuff nilla :)

  • Chris Lord Of All on Feb 15, 2009

    that was great nilla :D WOO hehe

  • Jack on Feb 15, 2009

    really nice story, i felt how Briar felt, scared the guards would find me

  • Matt R on Oct 19, 2009

    Awesome! I like it. :)

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