Comments on: Sandra Chapter 01: the Accident

By: Ralph Brandt

Ralph Brandt — Sat, 10 May 2008 01:47:54 +0000

I sometimes hope to use a character later and then don’t. I will watch cleaning out those as I proceed.

The first 20 chapters of Karen are written. I am looking at continuity.

By: Torsten

Torsten — Fri, 09 May 2008 04:04:59 +0000

Tanks for the answer by now i hav read „The Night Sniper”, “The New Necchi”,” The First Family”, ”Laura” and “Sandra”. And let me be frank some have cost me some sleepless nights, rely on some of them I have been reading the howl night thru “The night Sniper” Went in 3 days (Workdays) just as an example. Today I started “Densie” and I think I will have thru it by the end of this weekend. So yes consider me a fan of yours. By the way “The Night Sniper” was read 2 times just because it was rely good. One thing that bothered me a little on this sorry was s1ometimes you went a little too much in to the details. Having a 1/4 of a page of list of people that further don’t have a reappearance is maybe a little overkill but ok so if I had to rate it from 1 thru 10 (1 the best) I would say 1,25
Keep up the good work and don’t pusch your selfe it is better to get healthy then to spit out some chapters

By: Ralph Brandt

Ralph Brandt — Fri, 09 May 2008 01:12:34 +0000

Just wanted to add two more things. I am posting some chapters of Karen tonight, they will probably be up in the next day. Also I have at other novels there called The Night Sniper – a story about a sniper in the city, The Handshue Sect – which is about a cult that goes wild, and World War 2 which is a re-write of the war. You may have found The first family, the new necchi, and alpha four.

By: Ralph Brandt

Ralph Brandt — Thu, 08 May 2008 22:05:51 +0000

If I hadn’t gotten sick the first seven chapters of Karen would be up. It is far enough to post that much. It ties to the others but is not quite like them.

By: Torsten

Torsten — Wed, 07 May 2008 13:45:05 +0000

Hi there,

I have a quick a stupid question (I know there are now stupid questions but this may just be one).
Is this series a work in progress or is it done?
I’m only asking because I’m missing for example Karen and to tell you the truth I hate reading story’s and then have to wait a while till the rest starts to triple in. Now don’t get me wrong this is not a complaint. I really like your story’s, what I really like is the whey you build up the story, You think it is almost over then BANG there comes a twist and it goes on without getting boring. Sometimes I even caught myself reading the howl night thru without any sleep.

So as you can see I’m rather a grate fan of yours

Torsten