So, here’s the second installment to what will (someday) be my first attempt at a novel. This is where the trouble all started…


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Chapter One 

I met Trey in a club.   I guess that should have been my first clue.   My mother always said that church was the best place to meet a man.   She hadn’t followed her own advice when she married my father, but I assumed she knew what she was talking about.  I wasn’t even old enough to be in the club in the first place.  My best friend, J.C., and I had just walked in with her older sisters.  We looked old enough, so nobody asked any questions.   We’d started hanging out in clubs by the time we were 16.   A little make-up, the right clothes, and Voila!  We were instantly transformed into twenty-one.   And we could dance – boy, could we dance! We hardly got off the dance floor with one guy before some other guy was dragging us back out there. 

By the time I was 19, I could get into any club in Columbus, Ohio with no questions asked.  The legal age was 21, but I’d been out there so long, everyone was used to me being there.  I met Trey on the first weekend after he arrived in Columbus.  He was in the Navy, and had just started working at the Columbus Recruiting District.  He was out with a fellow sailor who’d befriended him, and when the two of them saw a table of six women, they made a bee line for us. 

I heard a deep bass voice ask, “Can I have this dance?” I looked up and there was this fine, light-skinned, wavy-haired, green-eyed brother looking at me.  I, of course, accepted.  We danced most of the night together and, when it was time to go, Trey helped me on with my jacket and kissed me gently on the neck.  “I wish I could do more,” he said.  We exchanged phone numbers.  I reminded him that I was only home from school for the long Thanksgiving weekend, but I promised to keep in touch while I was away.

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  • Kris Tagre on Jan 29, 2010

    weee..im he first to leave a comment again. This really exciting! As i previously wrote in your introduction, I will be following this story..(”,)

  • ken bultman on Jan 29, 2010

    This is going quite well. Let’s see how I relate. I served at the now-defunct Naval Air Station at Columbus and I love liver and onions. Am I gonna be on Trey’s side? lol. This is going to be a great write.

  • qasimdharamsy on Jan 29, 2010

    nice article…….

  • Christine Ramsay on Jan 29, 2010

    Iam really enjoying the story so far except for the liver which we had every Wednesday when we were kids and I absolutely loathed it. I am looking forward to the next bit.

    Christine

  • Ruby Hawk on Jan 29, 2010

    going great, and I loved onions and liver before I became a vegetarian.

  • alensmith on Jan 30, 2010

    wow i really enjoyed

  • standingproud on Jan 30, 2010

    way cool.{MORE},lol
    and I love liver and bacon with a gravy,mmm…

  • diamondpoet on Feb 2, 2010

    Wow that was easy he hooked you with that kiss on the neck and that wavy hair. Smooth guy!

  • alliewal on Feb 6, 2010

    Really great. This story is shaping up quite nicely.

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