Sweet tooth.

THE COCKROACH PART FIVE

As we floated around watching the arena burn, a sinister form began to swell and swell until we recognized that demonic roach. It rose to the size of a two story building, turned and looked at us with an evil grin on its face and then vanished into thin air. We hunched our shoulders, caught a gust of wind that was coming by and drifted on down the street.

So caught up were we in the thought of that demonic insect that we did not notice a quickly approaching carnival. Before we knew it, we were surrounded by rides, balloons, sideshows and ( oh no) a cotton candy machine, that we were abruptly sucked into. Eeck! We were twisted, turned, stretched and churned for it seems like an eternity. I was finally spit out of the machine and wrapped around a cardboard funnel for some kid to lick on. Oh how demoralizing. I had to endure this encecent slurping in order to get free. Then I had to wait around for Dave. He was all tied up in knots, bent out of shape and speechless. It took about an hour for him to straighten out, then he said,” and I thought that life was rough.” We just laughed for awhile then floated on.

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  • TroostAvenue on Nov 15, 2009

    Wow, back to the chase. I can’t wait. Could have been worse, how about one of the salt water taffy machines? Hell, you’d be stuck forever and no amount of sucking or licking…oh never mind. If you be needing some energy about now, though, might check out my new LYDIA PINKHAM REMEMBERED. Tried to link it to a supplier with an 800 number and overnight delivery but had hard enough time just getting a picture of Lydia affixed.

  • Frances Lawrence on Nov 15, 2009

    Nice write, this is turning into an epic.

  • diamondpoet on Nov 16, 2009

    Please spray some bug spray on that roach and let it die.

  • deep blue on Nov 17, 2009

    I love this sequel. Hilarious.

  • Brandon Huffey on Nov 18, 2009

    I agree. This line is very entertaining. :)

    http://authspot.com/short-stories/the-cockroach-finale/

  • Jimmy Shilaho on Jan 4, 2011

    I am loving this.

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