Ever wonder if you could die everyday just by saving your love one? Angel experienced it, all right. Because of her love for John, she saves him from his first death.

On a dark saturday evening, Angel was walking home from night classes until she recieved a text message from John, her boyfriend.

“Goodevening, I hope you get home safely. Don’t worry about me, because I’m not to be worried about. I love you.” he said.

“I will.. :) ” Angel replied.

Hours later, Angel reached home safely and recieved another text message from John.

“Goodnight, I feel so tired. Hope you rest too. Hope I see you again tomorrow. I love you.”

From that time, she didn’t reply. After reading the message, she felt that something was wrong but couldn’t tell what it was. She tried to think what that thing was. All night she was awake thinking “what’s wrong? is something bad happening? or am I just sick?”

In the morning, she waited for John’s text message like how she did everyday. She waited until noon there was none. She tried texting him a lot of messages that always catches his attention but there was no reply. That time she wondered “why isn’t he texting back? I really miss your texts but why aren’t you texting?”. She tried called John’s phone.

-click- “Sorry, but the number that you have dialed does not exist. Please tr— -click-. Angel hung up.

“How come his number doesn’t exist? Maybe this is one of his programs. I’ll just go to his apartment later..” she thought. She called again to see if it was really one of his programs.

-click- “Sorry, but the number that you have dialed does not exist. Please try again later. -beep- -beep- -beep-

-click- “Hello?” someone answered in a weak voice.

Surprised, Angel quicly yelled at the person. “Hey! I was so worried about you! Why weren’t you replying?! Hey, don’t do that again!”

“Excuse me, but why are you yelling? And how can I help you?” a girl answered.

Again, surprised, Angel asked who the girl was.

“Uhh… Sorry but who are you?”

“My name is Jenny”

“Jenny? Whos number is this anyway? Is there a man named John living there?”

“Yup! I’m Jenny! I’m answering from my nanny’s phone. John? Sorry, but I don’t know him.”

Angel confused of what was going on, she hurriedly went to John’s apartment. Since she had an extra key, which John gave her, she opened and was surprised of what she saw. She saw computers. She saw about 16 computers that made up 3/4 of John’s apartment. The scene was surprising because of the hundreds of wires going in and out of rooms and wrecked keyboards.

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  • eddiego65 on Nov 5, 2008

    Suspenseful! I like it!

  • hans on Nov 9, 2008

    this is a very good novel. can’t wait for the next one

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