A boy and his family move down into a dangerous neighborhood in Hell’s Kitchen during the Depression, and deal with the dangers that come along with it.

“It not your fault,” Juve commented bitterly before Frank could open his mouth.

“I’m still sorry for bungling your rep…” 

“Don’t worry…Rapi in bad mood today.  Lost a gang war yesterday…lost nearly three soldiers…So you got a plan?”  Juve looked expectantly at Frank.

“What?  No-‘course I don’t!”

Juve swore loudly in Irish.  “If five minutes is our time that means we have half it to get the meat…meaning…ah, bloody A.  Can you count?”  Juve asked bluntly.

“Yeh, that’d be about…ah bollix, that means we had two minutes and thirty seconds.”

Juve cursed again.  “Righto, we not gettin’ paid today, nor are we likely to stay in gang unless…unless…” Juve closed his eyes, contemplating.  “Unless we get something to change the odds.  We got to get our own money, but still give a whopping ‘mount to ‘em.  Keep those fat bollixes happy fer today.”

“Thought you liked the gang.”

“I don’t like The Street today.”  Juve replied bitterly, looking at the sky.

“So what’ve you in mind, Juve?”

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  • beatles!! (ok its maggie) on Feb 18, 2009

    i really like how you added the kind of language they would use during that time because when reading i can actually see myself in his shoes you know during the deppression and working at such a young age, and with the language it helps me feel apart of the story! good job! heheh

  • maggs on Feb 18, 2009

    also (sorry people tell me im annoying and honestly i dont know where they get it….)i love the vocabulary you use it makes it more interesting to read and it makes you sound smarter which you dont need obviously but i may…

  • Jeyontai on Feb 18, 2009

    dude is amazing I love it you need to write more of these. I’ll forward this onto a few other friends thta i know.

  • Lucky 7 on Mar 28, 2009

    blew me away as I’m gettin closer to the beginning…:)

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