This is a furturistic horror/thriller which I have posted in a series because it is far easier to read and more people can read the chapters in their own time then all at once.All Parts/chapters to this series are posted below in links.This story is about what happens when we lose sight of everything we know including our sense of values.Are we all doomed to hell or is there something more.

For years, more and more people from all over the world, claimed to have been visited by the slim, long brown haired, green eyed look a likes through these apparitions and visions. It was not just reported solely by doctors anymore but a wide range of people, varying from lawyers to beggars.

Apparently after these people had experienced the visions that had been delivered by the twins, they had all concluded they were being judged. Based on the facts it most certainly did appear that way after the many testimonies given by these people.

Elizabeth and Isabelle took the world by storm, turning into the most debated, wide-spread issue throughout the world, by both believers and non believers alike.
Good verses evil, God verses the devil, action and reaction were among the many topics forced out and discussed, criticized and evaluated by all.

With both the media and public attention focused on Elizabeth and Isabelle it became too much and was then they decided to go into hiding, although, they could only hide within themselves for so long.

For the record, I will state that each and every person that saw them whether it be through dreams, apparitions or through lucid visions, all swore that it had completely changed their lives and their way of thinking. They also confessed that Elizabeth and Isabelle had been true to their word, they were angels, the messengers of salvation. Apparently the twins would reveal their true selves to all of those fortunate enough to have been visited by them, showing them their very spirits.

The visions became more elaborate as time went on and growing in strength, the twins were now able to communicate much more clearly and concisely with these people than they had with the doctors. They revealed to them that they bore witness to God and for God. They had been appointed by God himself to be the keepers of knowledge of both the good and the evil that governed over humanity.

The visions now changing the sisters began showing their scrolls right from the very beginning and now like Isabelle’s scroll, the scroll in which Elizabeth held seemed to be living as well. The snake would slither off the book and sit at her feet hissing while she spoke. Described, it was evidently a king cobra, a completely frightening beast to all who laid eyes upon it.

Elizabeth would pull these people into a world of fire and brimstone. A dark world filled with pain and suffering, sustaining only the hot coals that would burn beneath their feet and the tortured souls crying out for refuge. Her eyes poured forth a red spirit inflamed by revenge, cruelty and rage. She would show them their transgressions, all of the evil acts they had committed in their lives. A darkness would engulf them, bearing down on their chests making them feel like they were suffocating on their own crimes against humanity and their sins. She showed them all the pain and hurt they had inflicted upon other people and made them feel that very pain in which they had so blindly given.

When she spoke she would blind them by the red light escaping from her mouth. Her voice, like a hammer beating upon their brains, she would tell them that they had but two choices. The first was to repent of the immoral deeds in which they continually committed and if they should not repent, they chose the second and in doing so they would then be weighed and judged by a trail of demons who would be happy to condemn and torture their spirits for all of eternity and they to would join the others they heard begging and screaming out for mercy when there was none.

The snake which had been at her feet, would then slither its way to their feet flicking its forked tongue and hissing as though ready to strike. She would begin laughing as though to ridicule.

“I am the keeper of the underworld,” she would proclaim, “And all in it! I guard the tree of life. True to the name in which was given to me by the creator, I am Shekinah, twin of Metatron.

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  • Lostash on Aug 29, 2009

    Excellent finish to your tale!!

  • Francy on Aug 29, 2009

    One word… Excellent

  • Diverseblogger on Aug 29, 2009

    OMG LOVED IT!!!!! You are truly talented in this field!!! Great work!

  • giftarist on Aug 30, 2009

    Great read..I totally enjoyed the chapters..Two thumbs up for you!

  • alc on Aug 30, 2009

    This was a great story! Thanks for sharing it with all of us! And good luck on the next one!

  • ken bultman on Aug 30, 2009

    You have tied this together magnificently. This is a story that stays in my library. The ending came as a complete surprise to me and considering the stories time frame seemed highly believeable. You either have a fertile imagination or you gained access to Nicholas’ book. Great work, T.

  • Ruby Hawk on Aug 30, 2009

    You brought all your lose ends together beautifully, You should publish it with no problem.

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