This is a furturistic horror/thriller which I have posted in a series because it is far easier to read and more people can read the chapters in their own time then all at once.All Parts/chapters to this series are posted below in links.This story is about what happens when we lose sight of everything we know including our sense of values.Are we all doomed to hell or is there something more.

“Do not let this fall unto deaf ears!” Elizabeth would boom making her final statement, “Eternal damnation and doom?”

Isabelle would then sing as if in harmony with her sister, “Eternal life and love?”

With the finality of the vision, the worlds collided and the sisters would become one, infusing themselves with the tree of life. Words from no where but everywhere echoing, “We shall return at your hour of death.”

After having the visions everyone reported they had slept for two days as though in a coma not only because they were so potent and mesmerizing but it was to atone.
The sisters did not stop until they were satisfied our way of life was changing before their eyes. I suppose they had to until such a time, otherwise they would not have completed what they were sent to do.

Some could and would say that the two blessed twins saved the world from self destruction and I for one happen to be in agreement.

The world would once again come to know our creator whom we had forgotten. The Christian movement over thousands of years ago changed the face of humanity, and now here we are in the 22nd century on the verge of something
just as great, two gifts given from God who are also defining, shaping and changing everything we know for the better.

Here I sit realizing that I have in fact written the story I had pondered over writing. I do not even remember having a pen in my hand while thinking about how to put my thoughts into words but yet here in front of me on this old scrap book of mine sits the story of the 2 angels that came to give us a helping hand.

Who am I to write such a tale? Is it just in my imagination or is this story truly real? Well let me put this into perspective for you, my name is Nicholas, brother of Isabelle and Elizabeth. I am disclosing my last name in order to protect those I love.

To verify for the record, I am only human and they also came to visit me like the others to show me the way.

With all honesty and righteousness
By Nicholis

We proclaim that all in which is written by the hand of this human to be true with all honesty and righteousness, with God as our witness.

The Keepers
Metatron And Shekinah

Once again I sit down to read this for the second time in my life. It was mailed to me by an unknown after the twins funeral. Apparently they held onto it until they saw fit for me to have it back. You might know it, just like them! They always seemed to give me a reason to smile, something I am doing right now because I do not mourn for them, I rejoice in them..

I had forgotten about this old book until now which is rather strange because I had adored this old thing. I see they signed it and that gives to me such an enormous sense of respect and love for my two beloved sisters that they will always be remembered as they were. As long as just but one person reads this they will be immortalized on this earth forever, not only in heaven .

Once again for the record they died within seven minutes of one another only this time it was Isabelle first, Elizabeth followed ten minutes later. By all means they were not meant for this earth, they were only here long enough to awaken it.

To formally finish this story my ending note to all is regardless of whether you believe or not you will still be weighed and judged. By who and what is entirely up to you.

Chapters 

The Keepers (Part 1)

The Keepers (Part 2)

The Keepers (Part 3)

 

Copyright © 2007 Tanya Kime-Wallace

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  • Lostash on Aug 29, 2009

    Excellent finish to your tale!!

  • Francy on Aug 29, 2009

    One word… Excellent

  • Diverseblogger on Aug 29, 2009

    OMG LOVED IT!!!!! You are truly talented in this field!!! Great work!

  • giftarist on Aug 30, 2009

    Great read..I totally enjoyed the chapters..Two thumbs up for you!

  • alc on Aug 30, 2009

    This was a great story! Thanks for sharing it with all of us! And good luck on the next one!

  • ken bultman on Aug 30, 2009

    You have tied this together magnificently. This is a story that stays in my library. The ending came as a complete surprise to me and considering the stories time frame seemed highly believeable. You either have a fertile imagination or you gained access to Nicholas’ book. Great work, T.

  • Ruby Hawk on Aug 30, 2009

    You brought all your lose ends together beautifully, You should publish it with no problem.

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