This is a furturistic horror/thriller which I have posted in a series because it is far easier to read and more people can read the chapters in their own time then all at once.All Parts/chapters to this series are posted below in links.This story is about what happens when we lose sight of everything we know including our sense of values.Are we all doomed to hell or is there something more.

The poor twins had to bear witness to this ignorance and the stories from the tabloids were no better, the most famous of them was that they had been abducted by aliens and had been genetically modified, I suppose thinking about it now it was no more of a bogus claim then that of the scientists. So many speculations and theories all backed by one thing, ignorance.
Seeing all the medical documents myself, I can say this with real proof about the matter, a very interesting anomaly happened to every doctor that studied them. All of them were given frightening and horrendous visions. Terrible images filled their minds of death and destruction, evil acts committed by humans and the consequences of committing these malicious acts.

Who or what was doing this to them was the easy part and the doctors had no trouble answering when it concerned this. Each and every one of them verified that it had been Elizabeth tapping into their minds and she would always end these terrible visions by standing before them and laughing at them, her voice sounding like raging thunder, powerful and vicious. She would show them a scroll, one with a snake clearly painted on it and she would thunder at them , “They are the fallen.”

Isabelle on the other hand gave them brilliant and beautiful images of glorification and selflessness, of long forgotten Saints and martyrs self sacrificing themselves in order to defend the earth from the terrible images of which Elizabeth had given. And just like her sister, she also appeared at the end of the vision sounding just as thunderous as her twin, although, her voice sounded kind, unlike Elizabeth’s which sounded cruel and belittling.

Isabelle stood before them and said the words, “The kingdom and the glory are all his you know!” Her words flowed through them like song. And once again like her sister, she also held scroll in her hand, however; her scroll bore the image of a star which appeared to be truly shining, letting forth a light which was as they
unmistakably put it, the divine light, radiantly shining upon them, filling their nostrils almost like a perfume until they felt like they wanted to burst from their bodies, to be set free from their flesh.

After the doctors experienced these visions, both Elizabeth and Isabelle would proclaim to them that they would never find the answers they seek through science. They would then proceed to tell the doctors something downright extraordinary, that they were angels and it was time to be awakened.

Some would say the twins were insane, I mean the question did stand to reason how many logical sane people actually declared  themselves to be angels, especially at this day and age? But there were also the facts. So what was the truth? Were they insane or were they telling the truth? That was the next question to be answered and believe me, it would be answered.

The Keepers Chapters

The Keepers (Part 1)

The Keepers (Part 2)

The Keepers (Part 4 The Final Chapter)

Copyright © 2007 Tanya Kime-Wallace

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  • ken bultman on Aug 28, 2009

    I’m ready for the answer. I’m kinda buying off on the angel theory except they’re still living…I think. I’m not going to second guess the author. I’ll wait for the next installment but not too long, I hope. I really like this.

  • Lostash on Aug 28, 2009

    Yes, come on now…..we’re waiting!!

  • giftarist on Aug 29, 2009

    Suspense..thrilling..

  • Francy on Aug 29, 2009

    This is just wonderful
    Keep it up
    You’re great as well as this piece of art.

  • Ruby Hawk on Aug 30, 2009

    You have us on tenderhooks. the suspense, the suspense.

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