The beginning of Kra’s story. An encounter with goblins and a close scrape with death awaken Kra’s draconic pride, and little does he know that he is now hunted.

Kra opened his eyes, slowly.  He was always cautious in the morning, and moving quickly alerted darcats and blade hawks.  It was better to look around slowly, to check for predators.  To see them before they saw him meant that he could live that much longer, maybe even get to eat.

He remained still. Tempted as he was to spring away, he know that as he was nothing around him could know there was anything there but a pile of stone.  Though he was a dragon, his scales now resembled the bulky, blackened stone of the dead land.  The earth had no life left, the sky billowed with smoky clouds belched out from deep volcanic craters and mixing with the dust storms that ravaged the middle lands to cover all the land, as far as anyone knew.  Not much was left of the way things had been, or so he was told.  It had always been so for Kra.

There was always dark, always suffering.  He remembered somewhere in his mind there had been pity once.  That feeling was much dimmer than it had been in his youth, replaced more and more daily by his deep seated instinct to survive.  Even before when his clan had not cast him out, every day was another battle in the war to survive in this broken world.

His gaze dropped to his paws.  The tips of his claws were starting to break off, being crushed by their own weight and size, and worn down more every day.  He used to have agile paws that even before he was Twisted could move with the flexibility of human hands.  Now their grace was replaced by heavy, stony scales, designed to weigh him down and make even the simplest task of balance and movement a contest of patience and determination.  He could hardly even flex the talons to his palm anymore. 

But where other dragons had fallen to this curse, he had learned from it.  He changed the way he ran to compensate for the lack of flexibility, flowed with the shifting of his heavy hide to outmaneuver and roll into blows.  The heaviness allowed him to crush where his claws could no longer tear, and the thickness gave him the ability to disguise himself completely against the dead landscape, giving him the edge of surprise.

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  • Sean Delaney on Mar 25, 2010

    This opening is great! I was instantly carried away by the raw survival feeling! I am interested to see where Kra’s world takes him next…

  • Sean Delaney on Mar 25, 2010

    This opening is great! The raw sense of survival is captivating. I was immediately carried away. I can’t wait to see where Kra’s twisted world takes him next…

  • Sean Delaney on Mar 25, 2010

    Oh no! I thought my first comment didn\’t post, so I posted it again and I can\’t delete it! Farewell sweet dignity:(

  • BonesOfTheDamned on Apr 5, 2010

    Excellent story so far! I love the description of the fight scene, I could picture the stony dragon’s every move like I was there with him! Definitely becoming a fan

    Fantasy’s my forte too, but I won’t spam your work with my link…if you get time, click on my name and look for The Drow, it should be posted by the time you get this :)

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