La Cosa Nostra.

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 As the CLK-class, convertible, Mercedes Benz, idled in park in front of the Fanucci home, Vincenz and Marie checked their mailbox to see nothing but junk mail inside. Marie slammed the mailbox door shut as Vincenz put the Benz in gear slowly and pulled up into their driveway.  Marie clicked the automatic remote for the garage doors to open. As their cream white, luxery sport Benz, pulled into the garage, Vincenz says in his Italian accent, “Marie, we’re finally home. The physical therapist wore me out.”

After both exited the Benz, Marie curiously walked over to the edge of the garage entrance and told her husband, “Vincenz, lie down and sleep for a few hours. You’ll feel better after a nap.” As she then stood, gazing out over the majestic Hudson River valley, seemingly enjoying her quiet morning.

Vincenz ignored his wife and walked toward the landing to enter the foyer of their home. Marie turned around with a pleasant smile and followed Vincenz a few steps behind. As she got closer, Vincenz heard a ruckus from inside his home. Confused and alarmed, he swiftly opened his door and rushed in to see his son, Carmine, wrestling with a strange burglar that was wielding a pistol.

As Marie followed, Vincenz yelled, “Marie, run out and get some help!” Neither of them owned cell phones, as they were both, old school Italian immigrants, who couldn’t be bothered with such gadgets of communication. Marie couldn’t help herself and peeked in the doorway and started to scream, “Noooo, my son!”

Carmine was on the smooth, red marble floor, clutching the burglars hand as to not get shot. 67 year old Vincenz lunged and landed on the back of the intruder as all three now layed wrestling around on the cold and hard marble floor of what was a beautiful morning for Marie.

As the chaos ensued a shot rang out. Carmine got shot but he ignored the wound. The shooter now had his dad locked in a painful grip and fired again, hitting Vincenz in the stomach, where he rolled over and slipped into unconsciousness. While reaching for her ebony amulet of the crucifix, she always wore around her neck, Marie screamed, “Jesus, Mary, and Joseph. Please God, help us!” But the Amulet was gone!

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  • Authoress Terry E. Lyle on Jul 1, 2010

    Interesting piece looking forward to the sequel.

  • ronthoughts on Jul 1, 2010

    Interesting Mob story here Richard, more power to the next challenge.
    Liked!

  • Francois Hagnere on Jul 2, 2010

    A great read, brother. Always extremely well written. Thank you Richard, and take care.

  • Atanacio on Jul 2, 2010

    first a terrific read second it’s about time I c you posting

  • Butterfly Musings on Jul 2, 2010

    WOW this is awesome! I love the imagery which is soo very vivid. I was hanging on every word. Can’t wait until part 2,
    you are a great writer:}

  • Duff D Moss on Jul 4, 2010

    Oh my goodness – no time wasted there :-)

    Indeed I am know looking forward to part 2. Well done.

  • Cebah on Jul 5, 2010

    Interesting, pacey piece of writing! Looking forward to part 2!

  • BradONeill on Jul 7, 2010

    very exciting start mr. wing, i look forward to part two.

  • Belinda Dobie on Jul 7, 2010

    Well done, RS. You met the challenge and came through with flying colours. A very exciting story. :-)

  • Katie Marie on Jul 7, 2010

    Hmmm. Now what in the world happened to that crucifix? You’re right Richard, lots of ties between mine and yours.

  • STEVE666 on Jul 8, 2010

    Nice one, Rich. Just started getting into it so hurry up with pt 2.

  • Annie Hintsala on Jul 9, 2010

    Good one, and part 2 will be in…..how long?

  • zoeyclark on Jul 12, 2010

    so how many parts are we in for? :) ))

  • drelayaraja on Jul 12, 2010

    What an interesting write :) Kudos

  • LCM Linda on Jul 19, 2010

    Glad to come across story in sequel. An interesting start. Can’t wait to see what happen next. Well done.

  • maranatha on Jul 26, 2010

    Wow! You and Cass are going to keep me busy, I can see! Excellent beginning.

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