Carly’s life is changing once again as she sets off on a new journey.

Light shone down through the thick leaves like little spotlights on the leaves below. The shade was cool and birds were singing as Carly wandered through the woods around Maybelle’s house. She had never seen anything quite so beautiful as these woods. Delicate ferns spread their fronds like arms reaching to the heavens while little while flowers played peak-a-boo in between shamrock shaped leaves. Everywhere giant trees stood like sentinels, watching over the life below.

Photo by Christy Tuller

She felt as though she was in another world, but I guess in a way, she was. Since the events of a few nights ago, so much had changed for Carly. She no longer had her mother, and she had been told that she was to be queen of a land that she had never really known exsisted. She stood watching two chipmunks play tag, lost in thought, and enjoying the cool air. She didn’t hear him approach but somehow sensed that someone was there.

“Hello, My Lady. I am asked to bring you back to the house.”

Carly turned at his voice and looked into the face of a very handsome young man with the most stunning blue eyes she had ever seen. She had never met him before and though he had called her “My Lady” she wasn’t ready to go with him until she knew it was real. She trusted very few people these days. As if sensing her uncertainty, he held out a roll of parchment to her. Eyes never leaving his face, she took it from him and opened it. Carly read quickly then said, ” I know my own way back. You may leave and tell Kiev I am on my way.”

“My Lady, I am asked to bring you back myself.”

“I don’t need an escort! Now go!” She was getting a bit angry with him, she wasn’t ready to be around anyone yet and wanted a few more minutes to herself as she walked back to the house.

“As you wish.” At that he turned and strode from the little clearing he had found her in. She breathed a sigh of relief, waited a few moments for her stomach to settle, then walked out the way he had.

At the house she found him sitting outside the door, as though he was waiting for her. She barely glanced at him as she went through the door. Inside Kiev and the rest of the council were waiting for her.

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  • nutuba on Dec 25, 2008

    I like this! It\’s an interesting story and it flows well. Nice imagery. I look forward to reading more.

  • James DeVere on Dec 25, 2008

    What perplexes me about novels on Triond is thier sheer depth, I need to print them up and read them. Thanks for taking time to write for us. Happy New Year . j

  • papaleng on Dec 26, 2008

    what a very interesting piece.. the photo compliment the article. Thanks for sharing and Happy New Year.

  • Glynis Smy on Dec 26, 2008

    This is now growing, it is captivating, I look forward to each stage of The New Queen, great stuff Christy. Time to think of putting it into book form??

  • Adam Henry Sears on Dec 26, 2008

    Hi Christy, how are you?
    This is very well written, and has lots of interesting action. Really good, thanks for sharing. Hope to see more.

  • Lauren Axelrod on Dec 26, 2008

    I will be adding this series to my blog Christy.

  • Holly J. Harrington on Dec 26, 2008

    Awesome, hope to see you on the bookshelves as a bestseller someday. Beautiful technique in writing.

    Holly

  • Christy Tuller on Dec 27, 2008

    Thank you everyone for all your wonderful comments! Thank you Lauren for adding me to your blog! Glynis and Holly, yes, I hope to be able to put this in a book someday. Thank you for the confidence in my writing! Your are all wonderful! Happy New Year!

  • trishia on Dec 28, 2008

    I’m happy to run across your writes. I must read more!

  • Kady on Dec 28, 2008

    Wow you are a gifted story teller keep up the good work…I’m going to read the beginning. Can we be friends and can you post my link I’m new on here thanks. http://www.authspot.com/Thoughts/Why-Come.424301.

    P.S I hope I’m not being too forward just looking for friends who love writing just as much as I do.

  • Kady on Dec 28, 2008

    oops here’s my pic I was wondering why everybody elses name is red and mine is black…lol

  • Glynis Smy on Dec 29, 2008

    Hey congratulations on hitting the Hot list, I tell you, Harry Potter move over!! x

  • Bo Russo on Jan 6, 2009

    This has been a great story so far,I am caught up now with all 4 so far.

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