Two brothers and their two talking dogs, set out on an adventure. The adventure of their lives.

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         It was the first day of the summer holidays and already Haz and Chaz were lacking in imagination for something to do. Chaz endlessly tossed a yellow tennis ball into the bushes for his dog Eittol, the German short haired pointer and she endlessly brought it back out. Haz sat crossed legged on the parched grass, his opposable thumbs rhythmical against the controls on his DS. Yolf his Jack Russell terrier, lay sprawled out on the grass on his side, his abdomen gently rising and falling as he dreamt of happier days gone by.

         “Go get it girl!” Chaz shouted to Eittol as he launched the ball high and long, it sailed through the air then landed somewhere in the mottled foliage. Eittol could be seen leaping and searching around but Chaz lost interest and went to sit with his brother. He had almost forgotten about his dog when he looked up and saw her trotting along the side path from the back of the bushes. Something red was hanging from her mouth. Certainly was not the yellow tennis ball, what was it? Chaz raised a hand and shielded his eyes from the sun.

         “Look what I found.” Eittol mumbled from the corner of her mouth.

         “What the…?” Chaz spat the words out of his mouth as he looked hastily round at his brother.

         “Did she just speak?” Haz had put his arms down. The DS redundant for the moment as he sat open mouthed watching the tall sleek dog as she approached.

         “You sure lost that tennis ball Chaz but look what I found instead.” Her excited, long thin tail swished from side to side as Chaz took the red thing from her mouth. Chaz eyes the size of saucers was shaking his head trying to clear his ears. 

         “You can speak and I can hear you!” he dropped the red thing and hugged Eittol round her neck.

         “Hehehe, I guess I can.” She laughed. 

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  • Papa Sparks on Sep 26, 2009

    I liked this a lot. I like the way you developed this and your attention to detail. Nicely done my friend.

  • cardy on Sep 26, 2009

    Wow want to read more what a good story!

  • raman13 on Sep 26, 2009

    Good Work

    Interesting

    Best Regards

  • martinpm on Sep 26, 2009

    very interesting piece of work!

  • Christine Ramsay on Sep 26, 2009

    Good work. I love the build up and the cliff hanger ending.

    Christine

  • Lostash on Sep 26, 2009

    Do you ever finish these little stories? Or do we just get a little tease? Another great tale, Lilly!

  • ken bultman on Sep 26, 2009

    Something’s about to happen. Perhaps the boys will learn how to bark.

  • petercurtis97 on Sep 26, 2009

    Good story a really good adventure look forward to more chapters

  • lillyrose on Sep 27, 2009

    I have already started chapter 2 lostash! I do tend to wander off stories, I was looking yesterday at all the erotica for my blog that is unfinished, you could say I have an impatient soul and move on to the next thing to fast or I am a quitter when things get tough but I am going to finish that work!!

  • deep blue on Sep 27, 2009

    A patient, detailed recollection of an actual occurrence (or is it?) without the slightest sign of frustration. I like the rising of the Phoenix, so after all Jean Grey still exists.

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