Kristin learns Marianna’s secret and pays the ultimate price.

As the months passed I grew to feel safe and loved in the Steven’s home. I attended regular school. I still held onto the facade of being a normal twelve-year-old. In the month of June I confessed my birth date to Kristin and Patrick after much prodding on their part.

Kristin was already making plans for a big party. She said I should invite all of my friends. I was glad to see that I had made some in the few months I had lived with the Stevens. After coming home on the last day of school Kristin met me at the front door.

“Aurora, did you have your list together?”

“Yes. It’s right here, but isn’t it a little early to plan?”

“Oh, no, dear, it’s never too early to plan a party. Oh, Aurora, this is going to be your best birthday ever.”

I had to admit that I too was excited by the prospect of a party.

Kristin took the list from me. “Oh, this is just fine. Now, you run along and play.”

“I would like a swim.”

“Oh, wonderful, but stay out of the deep end, and dinner’s at five today not six. And do wear one of those pretty dresses.”

I ran towards the patio and into the poolroom. I changed into my swimsuit and dove into the pool. The water felt so good that I didn’t want to get out. I felt like I was born to be a fish. Kristin even suggested I join the swim team when school started next year. At first I thought the idea a little absurd, but I did enjoy swimming. So I thought why not?

After I finished my swim I went upstairs to my room to change for dinner. I didn’t like wearing dresses much, but I did it only to appease Kristin’s ego. Almost every night some business contact of Patrick’s showed up at our door with their wives. It was very important to Kristin that the women of the Lady’s League accepted her. They all knew that I was adopted but thought Kristin a saint for taking me in. At first it made me feel like a charity case, but Kristin explained that was just the way with socialites.

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  • Kiki Stamatiou on Sep 6, 2008

    I like the way the plot thickens as the story unfolds. It draws alot of curiosity in me, in that if makes me wonder if the scientists who worked with Mary\’s parents were conducting experiments on her from the day she was born. I wonder if that’s all she ever was, a scientific experiment. It also makes me wonder if this is the reason Dr. Brown forcefully impregnated Mary’s mother with her.

    Great job so far.

    Take Care,

    Kiki Stamatiou (Joanna Maharis)

  • Juancav on Oct 27, 2008

    This is more truculent now, is becoming more exciting,Mary is about to run away.

  • RS Wing on Jul 14, 2010

    Wow! How this story has changed so rapidly. “M” has the power and force of precognition and the ability to ward off demons when provoked. Pretty wild read and very real, as this scenario in the bus station was creepy and typical of perverts. Did the whole house in Vermont burn up in flames? Hard to predict where this story is heading….great work! I’m hooked!

  • Erin Miller on Mar 13, 2011

    This is a very addicting story.

  • AKanksha on Jun 18, 2011

    Very interesting story..nice plot.

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