The Stone Circles (Draft)

Tom Barnes on Aug 22, 2009

Tags: circles, draft, fantasy, Fiction, Novel, Sam, stone, the

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First chapter (draft) of the novel would be gratefull if you could give any tips .

A new day dawned on the world and with it new challenges, new faces and new people to meet.

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Anna on Aug 23, 2009
Great writer(:
cant wait to read what happens next, keep it coming.
Cruella de ville on Aug 23, 2009
Needs proof reading for spelling and grammatical checks, very descriptive, felt a bit depressed until the sun came up at the beginning of the new day.
Good first draft though.
fern. x on Aug 24, 2009
such a talented writer. now heres someone that could go far (:
x
Jane Jane on Sep 10, 2009
nice. keep it up.=)

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