Reese pleads with Cree to give their relationship another chance. Will he get his wish?

Cree ran down the hallway and out of sight as fast as she could. She did not want to have to explain herself or the note Reese had left her to either of her friends, even though there really wasn’t anything to tell. Jenny would be cool and not press too much, but Millie would be relentless and not let up until she knew every juicy detail.

She couldn’t go out with Reese again. Last night was their third try. Three strikes and you’re out, Cree thought. What was the point? It would just end up the same as all the other times. Something always happened to sabotage their dates.

Cree was beginning to think that as a couple, they were doomed. She would rather keep him as a friend then try for a relationship again. She had managed to make it to the kitchen before her two friends caught up with her.

“Hey, what gives?” Millie said.

“Nothing,” Cree said. “I’m just hungry.”

“Yea, I’ll bet,” Millie said, then whispered in her ear, “But I don’t think it’s breakfast you’re hungry for.”

“Don’t be ridiculous,” Cree fumed, slapping Millie’s arm on her way to the refrigerator where she hunted for something to eat.

“Butter, eggs, milk, some red stuff, orange juice, purple drink, ahh! Sunny D! I mean, bacon.” She went over to the cupboard to get a bowl and a plate; then hunted frantically for a frying pan and spatula.

While Cree prepared a breakfast of French toast and bacon; Millie repeatedly tried to get her attention by yelling at top of her lungs but Cree just hummed to herself some R.E.M song she had heard on the radio the other day.

Meanwhile, Jenny laughed hysterically from atop her granite countertop perch as she watched Millie shouting to the top of her lungs, while Cree just hummed away to her imaginary headphones like she didn’t exist.

Even after breakfast was cooked and she prepared to sit down and eat, Millie was still hounding Cree, who in turn was still ignoring her. Jenny just kept laughing.

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  • Kiki Stamatiou on Aug 11, 2008

    I liked this story very much so, because it takes me back to my college days. My work is published on this website under my pen name Joanna Maharis. Please let me no what you think of my work.

    I really enjoyed reading this story of yours.

    Thank you.

    Sincerely,

    Kiki Stamatiou

  • Kiki Stamatiou on Sep 1, 2008

    I like the new material that has been added. It shows an even deeper side of Reese. And also the closeness Cree has between herself, Jenny and Millie. Reese seems like a very caring guy. I can\’t wait to read more.

    Take Care,

    Kiki Stamatiou (Joanna Maharis)

  • Glynis Smy on Sep 30, 2008

    A great finish to your story! A simple storyline with so many emotions, good work

  • Juancav on Nov 3, 2008

    Reese and Cree increase their friendship.

  • xoxo on Nov 16, 2008

    A good read. Thanks for sharing this,Allison.

  • Kali on Mar 18, 2009

    This story gets better and better.

  • Will Davis on Jul 7, 2009

    As always a fine peace of work. Hope to see more.

  • California Dreamer on Jul 9, 2009

    Nice to see it continued, please continue on with more :)

  • Write Easy on Sep 12, 2009

    awesome! just awesome!

  • leylucs on Jan 28, 2010

    Great story!

  • Tattoo3658we on Oct 1, 2010

    What a bad start to there relationship!

  • Roe2115 on Nov 17, 2010

    Awesome story. I am definitely hooked.

  • JoyablesVergara on Mar 14, 2011

    still good! very good! continue!

  • Hendrik on Mar 14, 2011

    Good!!

  • CVSivaprakashan on Mar 15, 2011

    Fine piece of work.

  • David on Apr 29, 2011

    Good work. Please continue.

  • tani90 on May 6, 2011

    Excellent story. Amazing story, loved it :)

  • The Button on May 22, 2011

    What an amazing story, brings me back to my childhood and the glory days.

  • vhien on Sep 19, 2011

    A sweet story of childhood love. Puppy love are great memories that you can take with when you grow up, they are one of the reason why I smile once in while.

  • Iwantmygirlfriendback on Sep 22, 2011

    The trick to getting back together is give each other some space first, and don’t try so hard.

  • Neil Pearson on Nov 2, 2011

    Great story, thanks!

  • ana on Nov 16, 2011

    very good. thanks for sharing this

    relationship advice http://www.flirtskills.com

  • stephen koyoo on Nov 16, 2011

    wow that was a masterpiece kudos

  • study abroad on Nov 17, 2011

    i m high on emotions after reading this. i so loved it.

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