This is the first episode of the book Unjust Garrett is older and a whole lot more ruthless than he was when he was younger. He has developed some smoothness about him but he is the wrong guy to mess with.

UNJUSTIFIED

“Um ma gangsta um mama G all all the above but before all that um ma 

motherfucking thug” 

“Garrett” ,“Garrett” “ yes ma,am” he answers. “Boy if you don’t come get this 

got damn cell phone” um ma tho it out the got damn window!” 

You know I gos-ta carry my ass to work tonight” and this Betta be the last time 

you come in after me” you need to get a motherfucking job you can’t sell crack for 

ever dummy. 

Ma why you trippin? Garrett says umma getting money ain I? He puts his cell 

to his ear and walks away. “Yo who dis?” “you have a collect call from” “Dee” 

An inmate in the Alvin S Glenn detention center” to accept these charges press 

1. “beep” whats up my dog, what the fuck you doing in the county? “Man you 

already know” said Dee. 

Let me guess you an ya baby moms got into it again? ma-an” “ Yeah man that 

shit bad now tho big homey” why you stressing you know she gon come get you 

dumb ass” man shorty in the hospital G” what the fuck” you beat her ass that 

bad Dee!” 

No man that bitch was trip-pin like she neeeeva trip before man she seen me wit 

geisha man coming out the telly yo” and she been screaming on that shit she say 

she been following since I left the crib! She on some shit “ like yeah motherfucker 

I seen yo bitch ass pick that bitch up and take her to the H.I! 

But 

I played it smart like a motherfucking card shark knew you thought your ass 

was gon come home like ain shit happen so I keep quite and waited. Man how 

the hell you get caught you know the Jeezy  rule nigga! 

But what make the shit so crazy G she ain even blow up the spot on a nigga! 

And whats even worse she sees me but ya boy ain even see shorty she was 

watching me all that day, you know I be stupid high and only have my eyes open fa 

12. You know them PO PO got it in fa me especially since that summer when we 

was Lil an I blast Sgt Haley in the chest and beat that shit on a tech. 

But anyway um  cumin in the crib all fucked up and shorty rush me with a 

knife and stabbed me in the the back wit that shit! “WHAT!” G says “so what 

you do D?” Man, Dog I shot that bitch cuz.” I tried to take that bitch out she 

ain die tho!” Hold, hold hold up!!, You really tried to off that bitch cuz “ G 

asked!? A bitch stab you in the back motherfucker what you gon do?! True that, 

true that. 

Um-ma try to dead that ho too but a G said, look check it, Umma see bout 

yo bond and see what I can do to get you back on that streets man but, right 

now I gotta go collect this bread man, can’t let these Lil goons out ch-ea think 

um slip-pin. Cause then I’ll be motivating the glock 40 puttin them six feet 

beneath the streets, ya feel me, so you just hold it down in there and I’m gon 

hold it down out here, Peace Homie! ‘Peace” D said before the call was 

disconnected! 

G puts his phone in his hip case grabs his glock forty, his car keys and a half 

ounce of kush out of a secret compartment he built in the in his closet and leaves 

the house never saying anything to his mother. Has he’s headed out the door 

miss estelle his mother meets him and the door and says look you tomorrow’s 

friday and I funna bring the drinks out. 

Tell Alexis I want here to come ova here and help me cook, cause um ma sell 

some plates tomorrow. “Yes ma’am” Garrett replies! 

And boy be careful out there its somebody out there that’s as fool as you if not 

foola Estelle says emphatically looking at her son with fear in her eyes! Yes 

ma’am . G6 gets in his 2010 black on black dodge charger sit-tin on 24” and 

cranks the radio “um marry to the game she even got a wedding ring six white cars 

yo I put that on every thang” young Jeezy blaring from the expensive sound 

system That G6 Jacked from some young cat named Top about a week a go. 

G6 stroll through the city looking for his goons to get the days paper that’s owed 

him from the packages he dropped of the day before! My dogs should be finish by 

now its already eight thirty he says to him self suddenly his phones starts to 

vibrate annoyed he says to him self who the fuck could this be? Its a text 

message from Alexis. Alexis is Jeezy’s main chick the only one he would actually 

give money too! 

Hey baby mom dukes just called said that she wanted me to 

come help her cook I got you don’t have to come and get 

um with Angie and she Gonna drop me off O yeah ya 

boy locked up again just in case you didn’t know 

Love you see you later mu-ah! 

Riding threw white house projects G notices all the police and ambulances that 

are I the area! It on fire out this bitch today G things to himself but I’m still going to 

get mine and they Betta have it all! G’s phone began to ring through his speakers 

he pulls it out and see an incoming call from Gata. 

G answers what up Gata what ya pockets looking like, They tight they tight Gata 

says. You got that for me Gata get asks Gata referring to his money yeah homey I 

crushed the game I was sold out at 3 o’clock to day I an call ya cause I was wit 

Kenesha from club Evo beating that shit right! 

That’s whats up! G says A meat meet the sunoco on river dale blvd cause the 

streets is blazin in the projects cuzo! Yeah I know Gata Say’s That bitch Cali wit 

the purple kush got dead-ed about two hours ago! Word G Say’s! She never paid 

Jamaica Pete fo them ten pounds so the dreds came through and cut that bitch 

head off! Daaaamn G6 said! 

A yo Gata um pullin in the sunoco now how long you gonna be? I,ll be there in 

2&2 Gata responds I gotta make a pit stop and drop shorty off what you driving G 

gata asks um in the Charger by the phone booth aiight Gata say. 

Oh Gata it aint green no more its all black now. “ok bruh I got you um ma call you 

when um close” says Gata. “Thats whats up” 

! G6 hangs up the phone and walks in he store when he sees this fine as check 

enetering before him she was gorgeous a stallion she had a nice even chocolate 

covered skin tone wit race horse ass and thighs long shiny jet black hair and the 

walked with grace like ther world is her oyster and she the black pearl inside! Um 

um um! G says under his breathe as he opens the door for her she looks at him 

with out a blemish to be found on her face and smiles eying him the like he was 

the true black Adonis. 

Why”thank you sir” and “dudes had me thinking chivalry was dead” she says. “Nah ma 

chivalry ain’t dead them cats just scared” “to be polite trying to protect their image G 

says” smiling playfully! “And what about your image she says”!

 “Baby girl G don’t have an image um just me.” “ I’m too real to try to portray the image 

that people perceive me to be.

 “I’m always the same old G like genuine!” “Whats yo name lil momma?” G asks as he 

turns to the cash still looking back at the shawty! “Essence” she reply’s “and I take it 

They call you G.

 “Whats it stand for cause G ain’t yo government name”? “No its not my name is Garrett 

but in these streets they call me G6 he replies”. Hers my number Garrett “call me some 

time” says Essence.” “That;s whats up” he replies. 

Let me get a box of dutch masters and a pack of Newport 100s’ in a box he tells the 

cashier oh and let me get 3 luck row lotto tickets “here you go sir and that ‘ll be 11.54$ G 

reaches in his pocket and pulls out a large wad of money and removes 3 five dollar bills. 

The cashier tells him to have a good day as he’s handing G his change you too G replied 

exiting the store. 

“Damn” G says I been in the store thirty minutes and this cat ain’t here yet! Man let me 

call this dude got me waiting and shit. Grabs his cell he notices that he has to middde 

text messages from gata but when he open then we opens them there blank, he tries to 

call Gator but he gets no answer. He calls Gator’s girl Shameka, who dis she says when 

she picks up . Yo meka you see Gata, G asks. Oh whats up G I not know where the fuck 

that man at I ain see him in to days he wasn’t here when I got home from work today. 

Oh far real this nigga was supposed to meet me to pay me I talked to him like thirty 

minutes ago, Get phones starts to vibrate he looks at it and its a text message from 

gata 

Yo G man cats just robbed me man when I pulled up at the sonoco man and they 

got your bread! This ya boy right here talking he got robbed where I m at he seen 

my car if he did why he didn’t come in the store and I’m up here now that nigga ain’t 

here he trying get me yo ya man is done when I see him G hangs up on meka. 

He tries to call gata again this time he answers, whats up man where you at man 

did you get my text. Yeah I got it man where you at now man G said, “ looking fa the 

nigga’s that robbed me man, um ma get yo bread back my nigga. A yo don’t worry 

about it man come back to the sunoco, I got some more work for you just pay it of 

man shit happens dude. Alright gatas says I’m on my way. Um a go get it by the time 

you get there I should be back. G hangs up the phone sits is gun in his lap rolls up a 

blunt of kush and waits! 

This nigga is getting soft I played the hell out his ass telling him I got robbed at the sonoco 

G tells Shameka, baby you need to rob him when he bring you that work you know he got 

them stacks on deck! 

I am, Gata says laughing baby see we a great team you can even read my mind um ma 

set that nigga up then um ma rob him let me gall twan to go cop from him he’ll be my 

diversion to get this nigga he ballin too hard for my tastes! 

Gata calls twan, the phone rings twice before twan picks up , twan this gata 

whats up man, whats up gata man whats good my dog twan says, up chillin, 

says gata a look G got some new work that shit ain nothin but the truth the feins 

going crazy over that shit you betta go get some before I’s gone. True that 

where that nigga at twan asks , he at the sunoco Gata repies, thats whats up 

I’m a light from it. Good looking out Twan tells gata before they hang up the 

phones 

I gotta go baby Gata tells Shameka, Ill be back pack our shit cause we gonna 

go to jersey in the morning with my peoples! 

Twan pulls in to the Sonoco and immediately spots G sitting in his car he pulls 

up in front of him gets out and goes and knocks on the passenger side window. 

G rolls down the window. “whats up Twan get in” G says. Twan gets in the car G 

passes him the blunt here nigga hit this fire kush. Whats up wit you G says’ 

Twan says to G “man Gata told me about that work you got I came to see if 

you could front me an O”? 

“Front you an O huh”! Check this out buy one and I’ll front you the other one.” 

OK I can do that twan starts to dig for the money .G notice 93 Lexus pulling in 

to the gas station an sees it’s gata he quickly tells Twan to call him later and 

they’ll make the transaction then. Bet that Twan says and hands the Blunt 

back to G who puts it out in the ash tray. 

Twan steps out the car and waves at Gata as hes walking to Gs car. 

G’s watching them and starts to think Gata is trying to set me up he smiles and says 

Man um ma kill this nigga fa show. He gets out the car but not before he cocks his gun, and 

Puts it in his right front pocket . 

He tells Gata We gon get in your car I forgot I moved the work and didn’t want to keep 

You waiting so going to get it now. 

Gata thinks to himself this nigga is making it so easy for me he slippin bad. 

Thats whats Up Twan says and they get his can drives off he ask G while driving so where 

Got to go when going to Hammad village turn left right here I now a short cut. Gata turns the 

Lexus and continues to drives G begins asking Gata about the robbery, So what Did they look! 

Gatas says huh oh one of the was a big black dude and the other one was a light skin nigga 

Wit dreds. G palys it of I know the cats too oh dont worry we gon handle that you don’t worry 

and says turn right here. Drove down a dark road with view few street lights G pulls out his gun 

And puts it to the sides of Gatas head and calmly begans to speak so you just I’m dumb huh. 

You just think you gon beat me out a brick and then rob too. Gata stops the truck. 

G man ain’t nobody trying to play you man I got robbed for real. Did you bring me some bread 

To pay me with G ask him? No Gata replies. “I didn’t thinks so” G says right before he squeeze 

the trigga of his glock blowin Gatas brain all of the right side driver window. 

Gata gets out the car but not before wiping his finger prints from everything he touches in the 

car. He walks up the street cuts threw some woods wipes his prints off the gun and throws it 

away he continues to walk through the woods when he sees the back of the gas station where, 

he left his car. 

Episode 2  coming soon

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Comments (9)
  • Fuck You and Fuck Jesus on Jan 20, 2011

    Illiterate gibberish.

  • THEMADTYPER on Jan 20, 2011

    Thank you Dean for your honest opinion. But before you use the word illiterate maybe you should take the time and read some of my other work this is an experiment Sir I stepped out the box on this one I guess I’ll go back to the drawing board or stick to what I’m good at.

  • SharifaMcFarlane on Jan 21, 2011

    I think it would help if you used a mix of language styles. That would allow a larger group of people to enjoy it.

  • THEMADTYPER on Jan 21, 2011

    Thanks for the feed back Sharifa you have helped me gain so many more views and also helped me become a better author I appreciate our friendship a great deal.

  • albert1jemi on Jan 21, 2011

    nice share

  • jemialbert on Jan 21, 2011

    thanks for the share

  • Bo.Jack Russo on Jan 22, 2011

    This is a joke right?

  • LadyElena on Jan 22, 2011

    Interesting first episode.

  • Leonardo da Vinci E. on Jan 25, 2011

    The heavy use of slang makes this interesting presentation hard to read; I might wonder if a writer might want to use just enough slang to get it across at the right intervals just who the character is but certainly not enough abbreviations of regular english to make the reader labor as he reads.

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