Another great one Frank, and you say you aren’t a poet, well, if you aren’t then who is.

Another good poem, keep it up

Even though the old man was “rigor ed and diseased.” had he been in the company of his close friends and relatives, the outcome might have been different. You’ve done an excellent job again in this poem. “A spirit cries.” in other words, he was very lonely and sad. “A thousand flies on the inside of the window.” also symbolizes the clutter inside his home. “Waiting to be found.” The old man wanted to die. “obviously pleased” and he didn’t seem to mind the excruciating temperatures. You’ve done an outstanding job on this poem. keep up the good work:)

I feel sorry with the old man. Nice title.

I don’t see how he stood the heat.

100 degrees of creativity pa

absolutely love this…might be my fav so far…”decomposing with attitude”…awesome line

That is such a moving piece. We really must keep a eye on the elderly around us living alone. Well done.

Christine

gruesome but well written.

Well that gave me a bit of a shiver, so you know what that means, he back and in full force, Very, very, good.

I think I have answered this, but here goes That one made me shiver Frank…. I knew someone that happened to, he had 10 kids two wives a few gran kids…. how sad can it get? great page Frank.

I felt like I knew this man.

Totally awesome, great piece of writing

well written