Comments on: 1:35 Pm

By: Starpisces

Starpisces — Wed, 04 Nov 2009 09:24:32 +0000

Interesting poem again, Shawn.

By: Jane Jane

Jane Jane — Sun, 18 Oct 2009 14:29:42 +0000

interesting for me as it seems.

By: Debra Mann

Debra Mann — Fri, 16 Oct 2009 05:55:52 +0000

Another great poem, Shawn. I think sometimes we all get derailed from time to time but, we look for the clues and find our way back.

By: richard wing

richard wing — Wed, 14 Oct 2009 16:26:54 +0000

You reveal so much of yourself that helps others cope with the existence of humanity and our purpose in life. We keep moving forward against all odds and hopefully, God willing, we prevail as good people. Powerful and thought provoking. Keep writing! It helps you and I get through the struggles of life. We will prevail!

By: chantell

chantell — Mon, 12 Oct 2009 02:48:53 +0000

Standing Ovation.

By: lillyrose

lillyrose — Sat, 10 Oct 2009 17:22:27 +0000

You have been in my head! great poem, its good to get it all out.

By: Sourav

Sourav — Sat, 10 Oct 2009 17:09:27 +0000

Confused? Calm down… do one thing at a time. Liked your confusion!

By: Kaavs

Kaavs — Fri, 09 Oct 2009 10:55:18 +0000

I liked the part where you written “if knowledge is power, why does the military receive more money than schools?”
yes, i know the restless feeling of wanting to do so many things but not quite sure what your purpose in life really is….hope you get some peace of mind till the sanity train returns to your station.

Cheers,
Kaavs

By: Christine Ramsay

Christine Ramsay — Fri, 09 Oct 2009 06:46:02 +0000

I think we all have periods of uncertainty where life is concerned. I like the way you have managed to write about your feelings here.

Christine

By: Ruby Hawk

Ruby Hawk — Fri, 09 Oct 2009 00:16:21 +0000

nice and a great thing to do when you can’t sleep, just put a new poem on Triond.