15 Minutes

Princess Dre on Jun 18, 2009

Tags: friendship, love, Relationships, tribulations

Hello over there…

Its been 15 minutes…Are you better now?

Its been 15 minutes….What the hell was that about?

You hung up because you didn’t like what I said…

Now you think your the last word man…

Get that out of your head….

Have you forgotten what we first promised?….

To never hang up angry, love each other always, listen and stay real and honest…

Instead you hung up because you didn’t want to hear…

On something so minuscule…

Was it worth it my dear?…

We may not always see eye to eye…

However, always remember I’m your lady and you are my guy….

You won’t always like me and I won’t like you….

But remember its not a competition of whose blaming who…

Life will not always be rainbows and roses…

I know you know that….

But for that 15 minutes did you forget one crucial fact?

That we love each other and we are best friends to be exact…

We promised to quickly forgive and always appreciate what we have together…

and to preserve what we hold sacred forever….

If you did for that moment, I forgive you…

God Bless you my darling….It will be alright…

Just blow me a kiss through the phone so I can savor it…

I’ll see YOU tonight to taste the flavor of it…;)

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Lostash on Jun 18, 2009
I hope you patch things up tonight!!! Can’t stifle the creative talent!
richard reed on Jun 18, 2009
this is a great write,,sometimes its best to take your own advice nomatter who we are..however hanging up never solves a problem, though when coming out of text, for the moment it is the proper solution,,any how great write..stay blessed..fan/friend Rich
George W Whitehead on Jun 18, 2009
Nice one,Princess.
Darla Cooke on Jun 18, 2009
Interesting poem.
Katie Marie on Jun 18, 2009
Very well written! It’s not always easy to say what you want to say and still keep the beauty in the words, but you did it very well here.
Jeffrey B. Merrow on Jun 18, 2009
Ffantastic poetry. Your words are a fountain full of flowing waters,with reviving droplets that bring feelings and emotion too the reader. Great job.
Ruby Hawk on Jun 18, 2009
Oh, a lovers spat, fiery and emotionel,It\’s fun making up.
papaleng on Jun 19, 2009
great show of sentiments. hope you’ll patch whatever differences you have soon.
princess dre on Jun 19, 2009
To all that comment everything is good…thanks for reading what I write…I almost feel like I measure up to the exquisite writing for which I read on Triond. – God Bless – Princess
Hazel Crowther on Jun 19, 2009
This a good poem, covers the feelings well, and gives a great message encouraging people to sort out their differences.
Francois Hagnere on Jun 19, 2009
It’s so true to say that life isn’t a bunch of roses!
Sheila M on Jun 19, 2009
The storms always pass ~ good write
irishpen on Jun 19, 2009
I really like this. Full of emotion!!
rizzei on Jun 24, 2009
i enjoyed reading it..there are realizations afterwards:)
Leonardo da Vinci E. on Sep 20, 2009
Love is never having to say you’re sorry after you’ve given your word.
diamondpoet on Sep 28, 2009
That was a great piece. I am so glad that I connected to this site. There are some really great writers, of course you are one.
Fatema on Mar 5, 2010
hey really loved it , loved the title too
Jerry Bradford aka Jerry Atrixx on Nov 8, 2010
I really like this. We all too often take for granted what we have until it slips through our fingers.

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