A poem inspired by a book I’m thinking of writing.
The idea of this poem is that each stanza should take you 10 seconds or a bit more to read, hence the counting down in the first couple of lines of the poem. It’s about a man who is laying in snow 52 seconds away from certain death and his emotions at that time as he thinks about the woman who he loved who caused him to be 52 seconds away from his death, 52 seconds to hypothermia.
And there she left me
52 seconds to hypothermia
As I lay on the stinging snow
Freezing in my solemn state.
I listened intently to her
Crunching footsteps as they
Echoed in the white enigma
That enveloped me.
And there she left me
42 seconds to hypothermia
Amidst the blanket of snow
Cascading on me like dust.
Footsteps gone now and
All my ears amplified was
My wheezy breath rasping
In the swallowing silence.
And there she left me
32 seconds to hypothermia
Whilst I lay petrified
In the ominous evening.
The numbness of the biting
Cold, almost like fire
As the snow burned
My crinkled skin.
And there she left me
22 seconds to hypothermia
As I wondered how I
Crumbled in the snow.
My breath slowed down
And I lay thinking what
I had done to deserve
My glacial death.
And there she left me
12 seconds to hypothermia
My lovely ice queen with
Her molten heart was gone.
Unrequited love speaks
Millions when it comes
To the myriad of icy
Emotions running in me.
And there she left me
2 seconds to hypothermia.
How frosty was the only woman
I loved so much that
She left me in the snow
To die, to fall apart in
The freezing cold where
I lay like a solid rock,
No more seconds left
To hypothermia.

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