63 Years of Independence

Priyanka Bhowmick on Aug 14, 2010

63 years of independent India, but are we still independent??

63 years of Independence

still our country prevails in prudence

in the memory of the soldiers gone by

silently I remember and sigh

the blood and sweat sustained each second

Hail o lord! keep my country awakened

for we still inhabit among the terrors

sovereign India but still remains the horror

blasts, murders, rape and crime

all back stabbers, blood spoils the shrine

the British departed but terrorists supervise

hidden in the mask of diaphanous lies

holding the hands of bombs and grenades

each day, each hour the mind dwells in menace

the small child on road that cries for her mother

gone away with the smoke black a day or another

the tears those still keep pouring without an end

upon the soil of my country, my India, my land.

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shivedi on Aug 14, 2010
JAI HIND
Lwandaz Tale on Aug 14, 2010
A happy 63! A luta Continua!
PARAM on Aug 14, 2010
Happy Independence Day……….
RAJEEV BHARGAVA on Aug 14, 2010
that was a really beautiful poem from your heart and soul, priyanka. i loved every word of it. i feel proud to be an indian. i was born in new delhi, the capital of india. i love my country too. superb work. thanks priyanka for creating and sharing it. jai hind!
wonder on Aug 15, 2010
A true share.
K64FUNNY on Aug 15, 2010
The Great post,thax for sharing.Jai hind.
Ethics0006 on Aug 15, 2010
We are not independent. We are just transfer from one jail to another. In this jail the jailers are our own countrymen. They divided us like the Britishs on the name of Religions. They treat us worse than the animals. If we want freedom we have to fight again.

I hope that I will alive to feel the total independence.

Happy Independence day who thought that they are independent.
Anj M on Aug 16, 2010
Nice share

Hi there!