This happens to be the longest poem I ever wrote, and it came out of nowhere. That’s all I can say.

Turning negative to positive,
A pile of dirt births a garden of color.
Like that garden that brightens the day,
A smile and a sigh comes to her.
Girl becomes woman
In the arms of a lover.
Through sorrow and happiness,
These things become her.
If she could count all the ways he makes her feel special,
They would add up to 800 or more.
If she could know all the things that he knows,
They would be 800 ways for her to adore.
Night becomes day,
In this world where shadows once ruled.
No incoherent voices echo
Where once in the sun two lovers dueled.
Spirits of love-hate ruled here,
Through centuries, just passing time.
Now laid to rest in the splendor of love.
No harsh words to be spoken, death to the unkind.
800 ways did they know
To beat each other down,
But to pick each other up,
800 ways they found.
I see him atop a castle of mist,
Forgotten gargoyle of my dreams.
Night brings life to the statue.
His fate has relied on me.
Break away from that stone prison.
Dazzle in the darkness that is your home.
Speak ancient lover of the things that bind us,
For when morning comes you shall be gone.
But 800 ways he shall return
To fill me with joy.
Through these lonely days
My stone lover stands in all his glory.
The dove cries in her sleep
For the choices that she’s made.
Nothing can bring back the sparkling gems
Twisted among the braid.
Golden fair was she,
But darkened through the years.
She mourns for the clouds of white
That has broken her wings to tears.
800 ways does she contemplate death.
In her room not a candle burns.
In all the time her memories made.
800 ways age does turn.
The golden fleece lies upon a wood.
The old scarecrow stands lifeless.
To look into his eyes, one can know the truth.
His heart lies there, beyond that straw vest.
If he should speak, what would he say?
If he could move, what would he do?
His face possesses an invisible tear.
For his kind, this dirty world can be so cruel.
So many ways I see him,
800 ways or more must I learn.
In a twist of fate I could be him.
800 ways does he burn.
In all the days and nights that have passed,
800 times have I loved.
Different faces, different places,
But it’s all the same stuff.
We plan our lives free,
Captives to our dreams.
It’s all for the opportunity to be
A perfect companion to thee.
800 wives with 800 husbands.
800 enemies with 800 friendships.
800 statues who see not the land of 800 tears absorbing the sand.
800 wings seen 800 skies.
800 rag dolls consumed by the fire,
But my 800 ways gives these players of life
With their 800 voices playing like a choir.

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Comments (13)
  • Kiki Stamatiou on Sep 2, 2008

    I found this poem to be very beautiful, deeply moving, and rich in dramatic elements. When I was reading this poem I was taken to a another time in history; thus, being carried back to the times of ancient Egypt or even back to the times and life of King Tut. It was as if in my mind, I was witnessing his death, or the death of an ancient man, whose soulmate kept getting reborn into lifetime after lifetime having to continuely bare the burdens of grief for the lover who was taken from her by the cruel hands of Death.

    Take Care,

    Kiki Stamatiou (Joanna Maharis)

  • Will Gray on Sep 10, 2008

    Great! Very imaginative an impressive.

  • Fiona on Nov 10, 2008

    Take the sun from the sky, take the love from our hearts, take the moon that shines bright,take the brain, wrap them together and you have poetry, beautiful. thank you Alison from feebee62

  • faerygirl on Nov 10, 2008

    wow, deep and so full of emotions. Great work Allson!

  • Juancav on Nov 10, 2008

    800 Times I have read this poem,800 times I have travelled to different worlds and ages,800 times I have joined to the choir.

  • xoxo on Nov 11, 2008

    great work on this. beautiful!

  • Keiser Soze on Nov 19, 2008

    Remove some adjectives. Old Mark Twain trick.

  • Kali on Feb 23, 2009

    This piece is so beautiful for words.

  • macon on Mar 21, 2009

    beautifully written poem!

  • tracy sardelli on Apr 7, 2009

    Beautiful poem, thank you for sharing.

  • Jose Iglesias on Feb 5, 2011

    Very good poem! Poetry’s not my favorite thing to read but a little poem every now and again is always good.

  • evil on Jun 9, 2011

    This is evil! Great stuff…

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