A baby’s transition from an embryo to birth is described. The baby describes his ordeal.

Life’s transitions

Are always marvellous

They bring joy, pain

And at times sorrow

Some are smooth as silk

While others are as rough

As a bumpy road

- – -

In my mother’s womb

My embryo grew

Image via Wikipedia

Image via Wikipedia

And floated merrily along

As I entered the world

I was appalled by my struggle

And glaring lights

- – -

My senses were bombarded

With a multiplicity

Of stimuli

That my mind couldn’t

Begin to fathom

- – -

I remembered

Being slapped

Wiped clean

With some fluffy material

- – -

While in the nude

With no diaper

I was laid on my mother’s chest

While my dad looked on

- – -

I felt mom’s tears of joy

As they streamed down

Her cheeks unto my face

That were warm

- – -

I knew without a doubt

Where I belonged

That I was really loved

And at last I was meeting

My loving parents

That will nurture me 

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Comments (15)
  • Rosettaartist1 on Jul 16, 2011

    Another good one.

  • Muhammad Fajar Marthias on Jul 16, 2011

    i love the pic, it is a miracle of god, great share!!

  • PartizAnka on Jul 16, 2011

    Very cute) the birth of a child is a wonder…

  • chandrra on Jul 16, 2011

    Good one

  • kanivel on Jul 16, 2011

    What a meaningful and enjoyable poem! I love its flow.

  • Dreamy777 on Jul 16, 2011

    Beautiful

  • sambasivarao on Jul 16, 2011

    So beautiful

  • neopisiva on Jul 16, 2011

    Oh, so lovely and emotional…

  • Totton on Jul 16, 2011

    Awesome

  • rainfield on Jul 16, 2011

    We think back, and we write when we are getting old.

    Life is such a wonderful thing.

    And it started from the birth, from inside our mother’s womb.

  • SharifaMcFarlane on Jul 17, 2011

    Beautiful poem.

  • jaidadiz on Jul 18, 2011

    beautiful…in the end the struggle is always worth the boundless love that follows….great share

  • article on Jul 18, 2011

    very nice and well composed

  • HopeHoping on Jul 20, 2011

    Beautiful poem and the picture is just so magical!! The magic of nature.

  • juliachild on Aug 12, 2011

    Good share..

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