A little Poem I wrote when I had this feeling of nothingness.

Words immersed in streaming fire,

Keep grumbling me nowadays,

Who am i? What am i?

Why is there so voidness?

What is there in these dark clouds?

Why is this moment so discordant?

This moment which engulfs me in my heart,

Feels like if everything has come to a halt.

Nothing I could cogitate for this while,

Nothing I could feel for any further mile,

Time feels like block off,

And I could not empathize myself.

What is this so edginess inside?

But there is some mystery in this time.

Something I belong to this instant,

Somewhere down some distance.

Heartbeats like tickle inside,

Raises like smoke of ember,

Heart screams out again and again,

Reciting to devoid me out soon from this pain!

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Comments (9)
  • Aroosa Gloomy on Oct 27, 2011

    I like it.

  • Aroosa Gloomy on Oct 27, 2011

    clicked my heart.

  • freebird989 on Oct 27, 2011

    Thanks Aroosagloomy….I know how it felts!

  • Audrey Howitt on Oct 27, 2011

    Nicely done!

  • Aroosa Gloomy on Oct 28, 2011

    again here.

  • papaleng on Oct 29, 2011

    Are you still idle? good piece.

  • freebird989 on Oct 29, 2011

    @papaleng : I had this feeling sometimes..its sort of painful though..so i just write down in some words to ease out myself…anyways…thanks for appreciating!

  • Kristie Claar on Nov 5, 2011

    lovely poem

  • CutezSoNia on Nov 5, 2011

    good share

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