A very special person I know has a birthday this week and this came about while thinking about it. So I used the occasion stretching my imagination to write this spicy piece since it all came together.

Happy birthday to my one and only beloved husband,

I hope this special day of yours finds you in good spirits.

I gave thought about your birthday gift all week long,

it was then I realized it was already at home all along.

On our kitchen table you will find a special dinner waiting,

a steak well done ,a chef salad and a loaded baked potato.

We have orange juice tonight instead of chilled champagne,

two tall white tapered candles provide our romantic setting.

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In the middle of our kitchen table is your birthday cake,

its simply decorated with two glittery candles added to it.

A small black velvet box sits next to your birthday cake,

I smile as I tell you it cant be opened until dinner is done.

But all to soon we consume our dinner and a piece of cake,

in your velvet box you find a yellow ribbon and gold heart.

I excuse myself telling you to not move from the kitchen,

on my way to our bedroom taking your ribbon and heart.

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A short while later I seductively call you into our bedroom,

you quickly notice the scented candles lighting up the room.

In the semi darkened room romantic music is played on low,

but its me and what I am wearing that gets your attention.

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I was laying on our bed in a very short black lace negligee,

our bed was now made with brand new black silk sheets.

My clean shaved legs was covered in sheer black stockings,

the smell of your favorite perfume Rare Gold was in the air.

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You gently pull me up and give me some passionate kisses,

your dark brown eyes missing nothing of my romantic attire.

Beautiful is all my ears heard as you undo the thin laces,

your dark warm hands now roam where the lace once was.

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Your jeans,shirts and everything else is swiftly removed,

my dark blue eye has never tired of looking at your body.

Its very obvious that my birthday surprise has aroused you,

you look into my eyes as you remove the ribbon and heart.

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You let me have my way with you on this special night,

this kind of birthday gift you cannot buy in any store.

You smile as you turn the erotic table in my direction,

unbridled passion was traded back and forth on this night.

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But its pure pleasure as we finally came together as one,

it was very obvious that I chose the right birthday gift.

We make love time and time again as the night wore on,

finally cuddling close together when satisfaction was found.

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I love you very much and always will my husband said,

this was the best birthday gift that you could have gave me.

I reply I love you to and always will as long as we both live,

the ribbon resembles our life and the heart our eternal love.

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We drift off to sleep but all to soon have to get out of bed,

both knowing that we would rather stay in bed all day long.

But my beloved doesn’t know about the white lace negligee,

tonight we can take off where we finished on his birthday.

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Comments (7)
  • Lord Banks on Feb 28, 2011

    Great stuff what a birthday treat! LB

  • papaleng on Feb 28, 2011

    Hope he read this very sweet poem of yours.

  • Christine Ramsay on Feb 28, 2011

    Wow! I bet he enjoyed his birthday. A great poem.

  • Butterfly Musings on Mar 1, 2011

    excellent!! and very sweet

  • hfj on Mar 2, 2011

    I can’t imagine what you will do for him when you’re wedding anniversary rolls around….haha “Provocative”, and well done.

  • Aiyanna on Apr 10, 2011

    Have to say that would have been one hell of a birthday treat!!! Have to wait and watch what he plans for your birthday…. :) Anniversary would go without saying….

  • trio123 on Nov 24, 2011

    nice story

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