A Brief Flight From The Virtual Life

Cassle Tang on Jun 19, 2011

Tags: assignments, parents hapiness, procrastinations, semester exams, smile, Stepping stone, Student Life, student poem, study examination

Three weeks and I will come back, to my dear virtual home called Triond.

A big event is coming,
as it walks slowly approaching,
I know the moment is near.

There is no need to deny,
I have to give my best try,
Love it or hate it, my time can’t lie.

Juggling the assignments and tasks,
jumping over piling stacks of papers,
playing in the circus of life!

Jump here, jump there.
Note here, note there.
Remember here, forget there.

Panic is not the answer, relax is not either.

Procrastinations are my biggest enemy,
their comforts are fake and full of hidden fee,
it’s now the time to slice them into pieces.

For a smile from my mom I could not afford.
For a proud from my dad I could not tell.
For a hapiness in their heart, I could always feel.

So let me fly away from my virtual sites,
to achieve another stepping stone in my real fights.
Three weeks from now I will come back,
but for now I should struggle and prepare!

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Rosettaartist1 on Jun 19, 2011
nice work.
Dreamy777 on Jun 19, 2011
great one will miss you hurry back
neopisiva on Jun 19, 2011
Great work,Cassle Tong. Hope you find your strength, charge up your batteries and come back stronger than ever!
I will be happy to welcome you back.
Take care.
Ruby Hawk on Jun 19, 2011
enjoy your vacation from Triond and come back rested.
LCM Linda on Jun 19, 2011
Dear friend, wish you well-prepared and every success. Look forward to your coming back. Take care.
A.Tawnuh on Jun 19, 2011
poetic ^_^ !
Saurav Banerjee on Jun 20, 2011
My Best Wishes…
iva75cpb on Jun 20, 2011
Very strong poem, such a determination emanates from it. Great work!
Ebbin Jose on Jun 20, 2011
There are gems, there are stones,
There are friends, there are foes,
But I have to go one day,
And I have to go one day.
KittyK on Jun 20, 2011
Enjoy your time away and we shall hear from you upon your return…Save travels….
Starpisces on Jun 21, 2011
I will miss you, friend, come back asap. Wish you success also.
realityspeaks on Jun 21, 2011
Nice share. You will be successful Cassle. Take care. Hope to hear from you soon.
beingwell on Jun 21, 2011
Very nice piece. Keep it coming.
papaleng on Jun 22, 2011
that\’s why I am missing your posts, Have your day, friend and be back soon,.
Muhammad Fajar Marthias on Jun 25, 2011
great job cassle tang as always
PartizAnka on Jul 9, 2011
Great work, i’ve got a pleasure reading it
jace holmes on Jul 9, 2011
it had a nice flow to it, very nice and smooth like a jazz song. keep up the good work and will here from you soon.
Lasaev on Jul 10, 2011
“Jump here, jump there.
Note here, note there.
Remember here, forget there.”

I remember but afraid of you !!!
Cassle Tang on Jul 10, 2011
@all: Thanks for all the support. I now has came back to Triond after having a great time with my exams!

@jace holmes: Hey thanks! I’m glad you say that it’s smooth like a jazz song, I’m basically a classical musician and for the honest truth I’m having difficulties in understanding jazz, so your words really motivating me because I think now I have done (at least) a little progress here. Have a great day for you!

@Lasaev: LOL!! What part of me that you think so scary to be afraid of?
Eunice Tan on Jul 10, 2011
Nice work, Cassle.
Cassle Tang on Jul 11, 2011
Thanks Eunice! I’m glad to see you in my posts.
Peace Poet on Jul 11, 2011
It will be very good if you soon come back to the prestigious Triond, the virtual home for creative writers.
rappeter13 on Jul 11, 2011
What a great poem. Enjoyed it a lot.
briantaylor1992 on Jul 12, 2011
Guess I’m a little late here heh, but it is a pretty good poem. I could never write poetry, I’ve tried and am terrible at it haha. But I’ll agree, procrastination is DEFINITELY my biggest enemy, as well.
SharifaMcFarlane on Jul 17, 2011
All the best in your exams.
mona rastogi on Jul 18, 2011
great share
Wherner5 on Jul 18, 2011
This could be even sung into a song. Interesting poem! Whenever I’m writing I feel the exact same way – procrastination and unorginazation all around!
Cyni1106 on Jul 19, 2011
Good piece, I like the way it flowed like a song, well done thanks.
Joe Ram on Jul 22, 2011
nice one.
Atanacio on Jul 23, 2011
wow, amazing you are indeed a story teller your poetry reads so smoothly…
beingwell on Jul 24, 2011
Nice work.
Tiki33 on Feb 15, 2012
Another great one. Thanks!
Aroosa Gloomy on Mar 25, 2012
I like these lines

Juggling the assignments and tasks,
jumping over piling stacks of papers,
playing in the circus of life!
Dhegen on Mar 25, 2012
nice share
Aroosa Gloomy on Mar 26, 2012
again here

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