I am trying to shop for a car.

Image by skittzitilby via Flickr

I need help shopping for a car.

I don’t want to go very far.

I need someone by my side to

help me pick out a ride.

I want someone to bide for me.

I need to glide.

Hopefully, I can decide what I want

so, I can ride.

I’m not sure about that ride we’ve looked at.

I don’t want to slide.

I just want a nice car to ride.

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Comments (13)
  • Jimmy Shilaho on Mar 26, 2010

    A nice little poem.

  • Olive B. on Mar 26, 2010

    interesting poem…good luck!

  • Pam Stushnoff on Mar 26, 2010

    Nicely done. Purchasing a vehicle can be very difficult.

  • TheOnlyTrueWriter on Mar 26, 2010

    Interesting… But I like it :D

  • Atanacio on Mar 26, 2010

    a good share

  • MartineP on Mar 26, 2010

    happy drive after

  • yes me on Mar 26, 2010

    Reminds me of an old fav of mine from years ago…. Arlo Guthrie singing THE PICKLE SONG .
    great share Cee G. CHEERS.

  • Sourav on Mar 26, 2010

    Nice one.

  • giftarist on Mar 26, 2010

    I find it cute! ^_^

  • Diverseblogger on Mar 26, 2010

    A very diverse poem! I liked it a lot

  • drelayaraja on Mar 26, 2010

    Great one again :)

  • abang12 on Mar 28, 2010

    Nice poem.

  • jamesII on Apr 7, 2010

    So you can go see Clyde
    and in a t-pee hide
    and sex the leave
    will provide–
    and the snow will fall
    and we will glide
    all the way to Washington
    on Windex! Cool?

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