A person driving under the influence caused the death of a child.

A car crash is a very sad affair

Especially when it involves

A fatality and has to do

With a young child

That did not achieve his prime

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Take Timothy for instance

That died in a tragic crash

On Memorial Day

As his family was driving home

From a picnic

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On that day on I-64

Their lives were to be turned

Upside down

When a drunk driver

Side swept their SUV

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Their vehicle

Cascaded off the highway

Landing in a ditch

Pinning Timothy

In frenzy his dad

Dialed 911

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When the police

And emergency vehicles

Arrived on the scene

Timothy was unconscious

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By the time they were

Able to free him

He was dead

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In church, family and friends

Gathered to pay tribute

To a promising young man

In eulogies, they praised

His intelligence

And remained perplexed

Why such a young life

Was snatched away from them

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“Ashes to ashes

Dust to dust”

Timothy’s body

Was interred in a ceremony

With a headstone that read,

“HERE LIES TIMOTHY ZEN

January 3, 2000 – June 26, 2010

VICTIM OF A DRUNK DRIVER” 

Image via Wikipedia

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Comments (11)
  • Saurav Banerjee on Aug 5, 2011

    Another sad story. Well expressed.

  • Raj the Tora on Aug 5, 2011

    Very sad indeed

  • pattiann on Aug 5, 2011

    Very well written as usual. It is sad for poor child. I hate it when people die at a hundred and hate it even more when a child dies. That is also the reason even though I am old enough to drive, I choose to not do it as I am afraid I would kill somebody or a bird that sits in the middle of the street.

  • juliachild on Aug 5, 2011

    Good share thanks

  • wonder on Aug 5, 2011

    Too much to bear! Agonizing. life has no value.

  • Sebastian Onciu on Aug 5, 2011

    How cruel destiny can be!A terrible tragedy!

  • neopisiva on Aug 5, 2011

    What a sad thing…

  • Dreamy777 on Aug 6, 2011

    car crashes are horrible and scary

  • juliachild on Aug 6, 2011

    good share …

  • AINIEE on Aug 6, 2011

    sad story,,, difficult to bear,,, thats why , in Islam,, Drinking is strickly forbidden,,, called as HARAAM.

  • PR Mace on Aug 7, 2011

    You should never drive drunk.

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