What happens in a carefully controlled purgatory.

 

There,

in a carefully controlled purgatory,

the guilty tells a story,

some proclaim their malefactions,

though rarely in any form

that allows for contrition or resembles

an unequivocal admission,

no real submission,

what occurs is indeed a carefully staged drama,

lost facts and omission,

sometimes a choreographed performance

without light and sound,

that allows the dark demon,

and the sinner to find common ground

where none exists.

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  • PSingh1990 on Sep 22, 2010

    Nice Share.

    :-)

  • My World on Sep 22, 2010

    Great Post……

    thanks for share.

  • Ethics0006 on Sep 22, 2010

    Good Poem

  • yes me on Sep 22, 2010

    This is a great wee page here Frank loved it cheers

  • LoveDoctor on Sep 22, 2010

    Awesome poem. The image is a great representation of your work. I love it.

  • joyhyena29 on Sep 22, 2010

    wonderful^^

  • Evelyn M Carter on Oct 6, 2010

    Wow! Great again Frank! Took me a few to get past the pic as it’s wonderfully interesting, then when I read, I loved that too! Great share Frank, thanks! :)

  • Atanacio on Mar 25, 2012

    thanks for reading guys :)

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