A good friend told me…if you can’t stand up to fight for your country, then you shouldn’t be here. I thought that was mean at first. Then I realized, my Vietnam War Veteran “unofficially adopted Dad” was right on…So I wrote this poem, two weeks after 9/11.

A Child’s Cry

A child’s cry amongst the evil;

her daddy went away,

They say…He went to heaven;

and that… he couldn’t stay.

A wife cries into her pillow;

her husband went to war.

Some say he is a hero,

some say Patriots lore.

It takes courage, in human touch;

fearing what will happen next.

Hope in the strength of good,

it’s now we take the test.

Can we give our sons for freedom?

Give our husbands in war?

Our Nations flag flies low,

and we cannot ignore.

We’re called to action, called to war;

making heroes of friends.

Echoed in a child’s cry…

This great country we defend.

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  • Dehan Nathaniel on Oct 31, 2011

    Beautiful

  • Profit Buzz on Oct 31, 2011

    The child cry and the world weep but when would these senselessness ever cease.

  • dazzlejazz on Oct 31, 2011

    Powerful and extremely moving words. Thank you.

  • Joe Average American on Oct 31, 2011

    That is beautiful.Did you read America’s Son on my website?You get a chance,read it,I wrote it for my son and all the American Veterans.

  • CHIPMUNK on Oct 31, 2011

    Amazing

  • Larinna Chandler on Oct 31, 2011

    Thanks for the great comments! Wow! @Chip…you are one of my favorite writers I am in awe! Thanks Dazzle for the awesome coment! Dehan you’re great! Thank you. @ Average Joe, I will check that right now, Thanks a lot!
    @ Profit….The senselessness will never cease. Not unless and until our elected ‘idiots’ stop politically doing whatever they want out of sheer greed, as opposed to doing it for the better good of all mankind. It’s brewing again.

  • megamatt09 on Oct 31, 2011

    Inspiring poetry.

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