A Cloud

Mrs M on May 20, 2009

A rain cloud.

Sometimes I feel like a big dark cloud

Silently floating about

Never really noticed

Never really thought about

Just making my way thru this world

Then from time to time I start to cry

This is when the rain begins

Sometimes lasting for just a few moments

Other times thru the whole day and night

The good thing about being a cloud

Is the fact that no one really pays attention

It may annoy some when it rains a lot

But other then that I can usually go about my day not noticed

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Comments (16)

ashleycollier on May 20, 2009
Very nice poem, life can be lonely at times
rajeev bhargava on May 20, 2009
the idea of a large dark cloud and rain is wonderful and blends in so well with the poem. i really enjoyed each and every word of it. BRILLIANT!
Darla Cooke on May 20, 2009
Very nice and well written poem.
QuinMonty86 on May 20, 2009
Nice imagery.
Peter Cimino on May 20, 2009
Nicely done.
STEVE666 on May 20, 2009
Good verse—loneliness in the metaphor of a cloud.
Kate Smedley on May 20, 2009
I like this imagery in this, I totally understand it too.
George W Whitehead on May 20, 2009
Lovely poem, Mrs M.
Daisy Peasblossom on May 20, 2009
I send you long distance hug. Sounds like you need one.
clay hurtubise on May 20, 2009
Sad piece, but well done!
Thanks,
Clay
Mr Ghaz on May 20, 2009
Wonderful!..lovely piece and touching too..I liked it..thanx for sharing this great stuff.
swatilohani on May 22, 2009
awesome
revivor on May 25, 2009
lovely flow to this – like a cloud floating lazily by!!
well done – revivor
Fresh Writing on May 25, 2009
Great lyrics…very relaxingly sad.

-Fresh Writing
spiritwalker on May 29, 2009
Very nice interpretation of a cloud. I love the style of this one. It is always nice to take some simple object and give it a personality regardless of what perspective you are coming from. Join me sometimes and we will write a verse from one shoe to the other….
CutestPrincess on Jun 10, 2009
a very well written poem, thanks for sharing…

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