My heart is bleeding for you.

My heart is bleeding for you

How much bleed do I have

to drain for you

My heart is very taint because

of you

I pour my heart out for you

All I get from you is a

corrupted heart.

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Comments (22)
  • Muhammad Sohaib Roomi on Apr 26, 2010

    Great Work Keep it up :)

  • mitchey179 on Apr 26, 2010

    Nice job on this one.

  • ken bultman on Apr 26, 2010

    A heartfelt write.

  • Evelyn M Carter on Apr 26, 2010

    Wow. So sorry for you. A nice share though and some good food for thought. Thanks for the share. :)

  • Emma Green on Apr 26, 2010

    Such a heart felt write here, great work keep it up

  • ShadowPsychos on Apr 26, 2010

    awesome :)

  • richardpeeej on Apr 26, 2010

    very good poem Ceegirl I really liked it .

  • VTech on Apr 26, 2010

    Good Post

  • Jamie Myles on Apr 26, 2010

    Good post. So very sad.

  • giftarist on Apr 26, 2010

    A heartfelt write cee.

  • yes me on Apr 26, 2010

    Powerful write Cee G cheers.

  • seoprofessional on Apr 27, 2010

    good share

  • Lord Banks on Apr 27, 2010

    You say a lot in a few words that is a skill well done. LB

  • singming12 on Apr 27, 2010

    good one

  • Jimmy Shilaho on Apr 27, 2010

    Give your all, bleed every ounce of your blood. Nice post.

  • Vikram Chhabra on Apr 27, 2010

    Your heart is indeed great to love so deeply…

  • Tina Cassello on Apr 27, 2010

    That should be how much blood do I have to drain and you have taint when you meant faint, which I am sure was a typo. It is a nice expression.

  • Will Gray on Apr 27, 2010

    You always amaze me by sharing such personal truths in youor life. May God bless you.

  • Starpisces on Apr 28, 2010

    another good poem, well done.

  • Leafygreens on Apr 29, 2010

    Short and a bit disturbing. Keep them coming!

  • Will Dee on Apr 30, 2010

    It hurt even more when they do not feel your heart ache. Thanks for sharing this emotional poem.

  • R G Lowry on Apr 30, 2010

    Great piece, very well written! I love ur stuff :)

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