The poem that is telling a confusing life and argues about destiny.

A couple snail on the mud

Through my own eyes I am clearly watching you both

I don’t know how you feel

I don’t know what you do

All I know that you’re there on the mud

No single words to say

No single motion you do

But you look so happy in your world

You and I are perfectly the same

But not on the shape

But not on the voice

You are there resembling my destiny

The same world to live

The same chance to take

What can you do?

What can I do?

You don’t know

I don’t know either

A couple snail on the mud

mud (Photo credit: Nick Saltmarsh)

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  • CHIPMUNK on Feb 5, 2012

    beautifully expressed

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