It’s very painfull when some one you love says leaves and they would not talk to you nor want to come close to you.

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A damn hug !

That’s all I was asking for

although I would have probably… wanted more!

I miss you so

even worse than yesterday,

the feeling’s gone worse since you left.

I couldn’t get a hug,

before you said good-bye?!

just got this empty feeling

and a tear in my eye.

I close my eyes and breath deeply

but still can’t let go of this feeling.

You gave to my life a great new meaning,

the memories of you

is what’s keeping me breathing…

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  • ken bultman on Jun 30, 2009

    It’s a good poem with a touch of sadness. Perhaps it’s fiction.

  • irishpen on Jul 1, 2009

    Bittersweet for me….

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