A dark angel desires passage to heaven.

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The dark angel stopped at the golden gate,

a little too late,

and he knew he should wait,

God deliberately punished him

by delaying to answer,

high above on the mountain peaks,

cold, yet sweat rolled down his cheeks,

his movement was rude,

the  angel was shrewd,

now shining with relief,

moment of grief,

God allowed him passage,

because he felt his belief,

his voice had a buzzing sound,

his wings dragged on the ground,

and he threw himself down,

but never with a sting of a bee,

God could sense his arrogance,

but forgiven as far as he could see.

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Comments (9)
  • sedlakos on Jan 10, 2011

    nice :-)

  • LoveDoctor on Jan 11, 2011

    The dark angel never lost the faith so God forgave him. A very reflective entry.

  • Anuradha Ramkumar on Jan 11, 2011

    Wonderful post.

  • albert1jemi on Jan 11, 2011

    Nice article

  • Sourav on Jan 11, 2011

    Very well written.

  • clay hurtubise on Jan 11, 2011

    Good one!
    Thanks,
    Clay

  • Anj M on Jan 11, 2011

    Nice

  • Ruby Hawk on Jan 11, 2011

    Well done,

  • yes me on Jan 12, 2011

    Good one here Frank cheers

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