Inspired by a line in Don Mclean’s song “Vincent”.

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It seems to me there is a place that lingers in my mind.

A dark and dreadful kind of space, that I dare not try to find.

Emotions I have kept inside, dredged from a deep dark hole.

I can’t escape, I cannot hide, from the darkness in my soul.

Like a mongrel dog it follows,always close at hand.

Beware it’s rabid bite,it will consume you if it can.

Violent angry hateful place, filled with darkness and despair.

It tears at you to take control destroyer without care.

I cannot run away from this, it is there just out of sight

Lurking like an an ambusher, to cut me in the night.

I wish that I could find the light, to somehow make me whole.

Til then I wage my private war, with the darkness in my soul.

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  • Mr Ghaz on May 29, 2009

    Wonderful!!…that was lovely and well presented poem..I really liked it..thanks for sharing this nice work.

  • Sheila M on May 29, 2009

    We all have a little darkness in our soul ~ great poem

  • DA Cournean on May 29, 2009

    Wonderfully written piece!

  • Juancav on May 29, 2009

    Courageous poem,well done.

  • cafftee on May 29, 2009

    Love this. Anybody battling an inner demon can relate to this.

  • hollynoel001 on May 31, 2009

    very nicely written

  • carollynne on May 31, 2009

    very inspiring poem!

  • Kate Smedley on Jun 3, 2009

    I can definitely relate. Dark but beautiful poem FJ, thank you.

  • Janet65 on Jun 4, 2009

    A dark, yet beautiful poem FJ. I am a poet and a nonfiction writer of articles. So, I enjoy reading poetry.
    I noticed one little thing, you have typed ‘an’ ‘an’ together twice in one line. Other than that, there are no errors. Good job, Janet65

  • 101 on Jun 6, 2009

    F J, great sensabilty in arranging such great feelings in this write!really great read brother! and cool inspiration music is alot of my inspires as well.Always,Gary La Buda

  • clay hurtubise on Jun 12, 2009

    Nice flow and message to this piece.
    Thanks,
    Clay

  • livemike on Jun 28, 2009

    great stuff…

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