Mentos is the most amazing chewy lolly ever invented.

Mentos,
You are amazing,
You come in many flavors.
My favorite is berry blast,
It brings back memories of the past.
When my favorite flavor was mint,
It sometimes makes me squint,
At your awesomeness.
Mentos, I love you!

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  • Michael Eboh on Feb 2, 2009

    Great thanks to you. I like it!

  • nutuba on Feb 2, 2009

    Hahaha, this was fun!

  • Betty Carew on Feb 2, 2009

    Very ceartive imagination . Well done denus

  • Darla Smith on Feb 2, 2009

    Mentos are amazing!

  • M Stokes on Feb 2, 2009

    Good one! Mentos may want to buy it from you ;)

  • maranatha on Feb 2, 2009

    Mentos, denus? Are we bored today?

  • S Air on Feb 2, 2009

    You made me smile!

  • rutherfranc on Feb 2, 2009

    so how much did they pay you? this one`s fun..

  • Riley Themend on Feb 2, 2009

    haha this is one of the funniest things i have experienced all day

  • Pete Macinta on Feb 2, 2009

    Tastefully done!

  • Bick Parker on Feb 3, 2009

    You gotta stop eating the mint ones, not good for the eyes! I enjoyed this one – the rhyme, not the lolly.

  • Bick Parker on Feb 3, 2009

    Correction to the above comment! I meant to write ’sweets’ but put lolly instead – oops! Hum, I just gotta ease up on the pills …

  • Debra. on Feb 3, 2009

    wow! Greta advertisement, Denus. Are they going to pay you now? They should because that was a catchy little poem. Nice work.

  • Maria Blazz on Feb 3, 2009

    haha, only you can dedicate a poem to mentos!

  • George W Whitehead on Feb 5, 2009

    Fun poem.

  • Joni Keith on Feb 19, 2009

    Considering your love for Mentos, promise you’ll stay away from Diet Coke lest you explode.

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