My dream of cruise ships that plied the sea were titillating and turned out to be mirages of my imagination.

In the deep of the night

My dreams were out of sight

And my imagination sailed

To titillate me

- – -

I saw many cruise ships

With triple decks

That transported my thoughts

On undulating waves

To established ports

Of call for all

- – -

Who could say to this day

What those dreams meant

Save that they might lead

Me in some way

To places I might dismay

- – -

So abide with me

And let’s see

What this was meant to be

- – -

I did appreciate

Those imaginary ships

Which became mirages

That plied the sea

For me to see

- – - 

I viewed these massive vessels

Which weighted tons

With passengers that wobbled

All around

Image via Wikipedia

Image via Wikipedia

As the ships were plummeted

By the roaring waves of the Pacific

- – -

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  • rubysexy on Jan 24, 2012

    I like your poem about the dream.

  • mdrkarim7 on Jan 24, 2012

    I simple adore it…

  • MJRapp on Jan 24, 2012

    I can understand your dream, but it’s pretty rare for something like this to happen. Cruise ships usually don’t sink. I worry this recent event is going to cause undue panic with people. Hey, maybe cruise prices will go down! ;-)

  • Angelji on Jan 24, 2012

    I would be feeling guilty if i will be spending much riding in that cruise ship , then some people have nothing to eat.

  • papaleng on Jan 24, 2012

    Good piece of poetry, nice that you have put into details what you have dreamed of.

  • LoveDoctor on Jan 24, 2012

    Lovely piece. Good imagination.

  • Martin Kloess on Jan 24, 2012

    very good

  • aheed411 on Jan 25, 2012

    Sensitive

  • CA Johnson on Jan 25, 2012

    I really enjoy this poem. I have never seen a cruise ship before so it must have been amazing.

  • avissado on Jan 28, 2012

    lovely poem and nice pic

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