A Dream Journey

Sebastian Onciu on Jul 17, 2011

Tags: dream, Mars, Solar System, space trip, star, universe

Sometimes we wish to travel far,far away…

Take a look at the blue sky

Dream of flying up and high

And of leaving all behind

Finally find piece of mind

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Wander lonely through the stars

To the moon and then to Mars

Forget all the earthly scum

All that’s nasty and gruesome .

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Move on with your cosmic trip

Only you and the spaceship

To the solar system’s end

And beyond go on,my friend!

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Far away in time and space

Your ship lost without a trace

Infinite your thoughts will be

Roaming there forever free!

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megamatt09 on Jul 17, 2011
Very solid work.
mphsglo on Jul 17, 2011
Very nice.
rainfield on Jul 17, 2011
Flying to the moon, and look back to our earth.
Farris Spoiler on Jul 17, 2011
nice
jaidadiz on Jul 17, 2011
ooooohhh, that is nice..good bye I’m going on a trip..
yellow rose on Jul 17, 2011
How beautiful a night can be,
Not anybody can see.
I love to watch the full moon,
But the night will be over soon.
I know it very well,
And to others I tell,
But they don’t believe what I say,
And they always talk about the day.
iloisabel on Jul 17, 2011
sometimes I wonder, what if I will go to a far away place and leave everything behind, forget everything and starts a new life, will it makes me happy? I always wonder but still couldn’t find the answer. Life is full of trials that sometimes we want to escape from it, right?
Dreamy777 on Jul 17, 2011
Way cool thanks
sambasivarao on Jul 17, 2011
Really beautiful poetry. I am also in the dream for a while. very good journey.
neopisiva on Jul 17, 2011
Good poem, I also wish to fly away sometimes…:)
Cyni1106 on Jul 17, 2011
Fly away and enjoy the time, free from stress, close your eyes and wake to a new journey the moon is full and you are there to look upon the universe. Thanks for the journey.
Cassle Tang on Jul 18, 2011
I bet that will be a kind of dream come true for most people. What could be better than traveling around the planets and enjoying the great cosmic views? Without no ends, without no restrictions.
Cassle Tang on Jul 18, 2011
I bet that will be a kind of dream come true for most people. What could be better than traveling around the planets and enjoying the great cosmic views? Without ends and without restrictions.
realityspeaks on Jul 18, 2011
Beautiful.
Totton on Jul 18, 2011
Really AWESOME ..
juliachild on Jul 18, 2011
great share
AdamMcAuley on Jul 18, 2011
This makes me full of wonder. Excellent work.
Joe Ram on Jul 18, 2011
nice one.
gaby7 on Jul 22, 2011
Sometimes I look up there too, and the serene imagination of the world beyond the blue engulfs me as well!
vietnam on Jul 23, 2011
BUT, I journeyed backwards
from the galaxy
to this wonderful mother earth,

now will you accompany me?
lets meet in our dream perhaps yours,
mine will be a battlefield.you are only thanking urself
to add on cliks
limited gain as no one willever visit u a second time…
thanking others by reading their’s ,
its that what u miss,
i told u earlier too miss….

the other day I recommended
the removal of VISA INTERNATIONALLY ,
THEY ASKED ME ,
hey have you a syampathetic corner for a Bihari
the world will become one big bazaar,sorry BIHAR.

I instantly withdrew
and
out of view,
I flew…
vietnam on Jul 23, 2011
QUICK ERROR…. PLEASE DELETE THE ABOVE…. AS I HAVE REPLACED IT WITH THE RELEVANT

BUT, I journeyed backwards
from the galaxy
to this wonderful mother earth,

now will you accompany me?
lets meet in our dream perhaps yours,
mine will be in a battlefield.
yellow rose on Aug 14, 2011
another great one!
KittyK on Sep 9, 2011
Great poetry and yes, we all need to get away from reality dream of life away from our immediate place…
Gerard Galvestini on Oct 17, 2011
Beautiful…

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