A Dream of You, Love’s Rapture

Liane Schmidt on Feb 6, 2009

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It’s beautiful and true.

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A dream of you
Like heaven falling
To bended knee

Rivers of golden purity
Flowing tresses of silken thread
Upon crowns atop cherub heads

Spinning visions of satin and lace
Ivory and immaculate
Set to frame the innocent face

A tinge of blush
Rushes the senses
Pierces the night’s quiet tones
Plucks angelic melodies

‘Neath the stars
In haste to embrace
All the promises we long to make

Candle lit with open heart
With open arms

Vowing before God and man
To never let Love’s rapture
Fall from grace, again.

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Fegger on Feb 6, 2009
Flawless!
F J McCarthy on Feb 6, 2009
Very lovely poem Liane, it is beautiful and serene. thank you.
hfj on Feb 6, 2009
You painted a beautiful picture with your lovely words. Well done.
MJPatrick on Feb 6, 2009
Fantastic!
Debra. on Feb 6, 2009
Beautiful and charming piece! God bless.
Lee on Feb 6, 2009
awesome as usual
Shannon Lynn Farlouis on Feb 6, 2009
From a most aspiring author comes many inspirational and truthful words. This is absolutely beautiful.
seashell66 on Feb 6, 2009
Beautiful and inspiring.
The Quail on Feb 6, 2009
awesome poem dear friend.
bjr on Feb 6, 2009
im crying I think i got allergies
Sarah Elizabeth Hume on Feb 6, 2009
pretty and sweet
Maria Blazz on Feb 6, 2009
Nice way to express deep feelings.
James DeVere on Feb 6, 2009
Was the poem related to the video? Thanks . j
nobert soloria bermosa on Feb 6, 2009
beautiful sentiment
CHAN LEE PENG on Feb 6, 2009
Beautiful dream indeed!
Ruby Hawk on Feb 6, 2009
Love is beautiful when it isn’t a heartache.But what would life be without it?
Morgana on Feb 6, 2009
Beautiful , melodic, and flowing piece.
AC Hamilton III on Feb 6, 2009
Very nicely and eloquently written with a genuine chorus of prose.

AC
Poetic Enigma on Feb 6, 2009
Another beautiful poem,
very well put together,
and a terrific flow

and thats a beautiful song to go with it (:
NA Staffieri on Feb 6, 2009
I always enjoy reading your love poems. Your writing is so inspiring!
clay Hurtubise on Feb 6, 2009
Very nice, well done.
Thanks,
Clay
C Jordan on Feb 6, 2009
It was very pleasant to listen to the love song before reading the poem which set the mood well.
Well done.
Adam Henry Sears on Feb 6, 2009
Thanks Liane for another imaginative write.
cole justify on Feb 6, 2009
I absolutely love your romantic poetry because the style and how the words fit perfectly together creates such an emotion of inebriated prose. As always , I look forward to more of your writings. God bless ………..
choobin on Feb 6, 2009
Dear Liane,

It’s is great, like the other poems. Waiting for more beautifal poems from you.

Yours

Choobin
tilted on Feb 6, 2009
This was beautiful Liane.Thank you I needed something pleasent at the time I read this.Great work as usual,your friend Chris.
papaleng on Feb 6, 2009
What more could I say… just simply beautiful.. Like it much Lianne
numismatic on Feb 7, 2009
Very nice poem!
Christine Ramsay on Feb 7, 2009
Such beautiful and artistic work as always, Lianne, a true talent.

Christine
Kate Smedley on Feb 7, 2009
Absolutely beautiful, thank you.
Emma Turton on Feb 7, 2009
Another really beautiful poem. I love it.
BC Doan on Feb 7, 2009
Beautiful poetry!
macon on Feb 7, 2009
your writing never fails to amaze me!
Anne Lyken Garner on Feb 7, 2009
Great choice of words.
trishia on Feb 7, 2009
another splendid,heartfelt write!
Nick Kenney on Feb 7, 2009
Very powerful Liane and very beautiful!
Linda Lori on Feb 7, 2009
So very beautiful~
Serenity Jones on Feb 8, 2009
Wonderful words
OhSugar on Feb 9, 2009
I think this is a beautiful poem. I like the way it flowed.
Anne McNew on Feb 10, 2009
Keep dreaming…
ash on Feb 11, 2009
Excellent work!
MarleeKnows on Feb 11, 2009
Wow, beautiful!
Mys Lyke Meeh on Feb 12, 2009
wow..again, wonderful work,, moving!
TommyP on Feb 12, 2009
Great work as always… Don’t know how I missed this one before.
Once again I am humbled. All praise to the Cali-Angel* See Ya, T.
FOREVER POETRY on Feb 12, 2009
THIS POEM MADE ME THINK OF MY LOVE. I MISS HER BAD, AND I HOPE WHEN I SEE HER AGAIN IT WILL BE JUST LIKE THIS
MMV Abad on Feb 13, 2009
Wonderful and dreamy! Thanks!
coker on Feb 25, 2009
sounds like everything worked out…very nice. i enjoy your work that have read…

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