This poem is dedicated to all fathers who cherish, enjoy, and appreciate their roles as fathers. Most of you may be able to empathize with the sentiments within the poem below which is written from the standpoint of a father. And to those who experienced similar circumstances depicted in this poem, it is my humblest desire to capture the essence of your journeys and emotions as a father. Happy Father’s Day to all.


That day at the hospital

I kept pacing its white corridors

anxious and apprehensive

yet too excited to sit still.

And who wouldn’t be?

After two aborted pregnancies

and a heartbreaking stillbirth,

I was certainly hoping

that you and your mother

would finally make it.

Then I heard your earsplitting cry

announcing your entrance

into this world and into our lives.

And when eventually

I saw you and carried you in my arms

you gave me a sensation

too amazing for words

and too marvelous I almost cried.

You have made it, child

you have conquered the odds,

you were indeed meant to be

the one to carry the magic wand

to make me experience

what I desired most in this life – fatherhood

Now, after ten wonderful years

of having you in our lives

I still give you that promise

I vowed to you

the first time I held you in my arms.

I would be your father

in every sense of the word –

protector, provider, counselor, guide, friend.

And as we celebrate Father’s Day

I know your heart also bursts

with so much love and gratitude for me.

But I want you to know

that I’m more than thankful to you

for coming into my life

for without you,

I would not be celebrating this day.

Thank you very much for making me a father.

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  • Anne McNew on Jun 20, 2009

    a very meaningful thought shared this Father’s Day…
    Happy Father’s day to all Triond Fathers…

  • ken bultman on Jun 20, 2009

    Precious gift to all dads. You have a lot of insight.

  • swatilohani on Jun 20, 2009

    cool

  • Kate Smedley on Jun 20, 2009

    Wonderful poem for father’s day, I think you expressed it really well, very touching.

  • CHAN LEE PENG on Jun 20, 2009

    This is a great tribute to your dad and dads in the world. Happy father’s day! Liked it!

  • Kairos on Jun 20, 2009

    Life is a blessing..

  • Unofre Pili on Jun 20, 2009

    Very fine piece.

  • clay hurtubise on Jun 20, 2009

    Very sweet, I like the perspective you used.
    Thanks,
    Clay

  • Christine Ramsay on Jun 20, 2009

    Such beautiful words and a great tribute to all fathers. Well done.

    Christine

  • Darla Cooke on Jun 20, 2009

    A beautiful Father’s Day poem.

  • HeyZel on Jun 20, 2009

    Very nice.

  • PR Mace on Jun 20, 2009

    Lovely.

  • nobert soloria bermosa on Jun 20, 2009

    this is so nice… happy father’s day to all the fathers and soon to-be-fathers in the world

  • Eunice Tan on Jun 21, 2009

    So sweet. Happy father’s day!

  • rutherfranc on Jun 22, 2009

    that was really timely… thanks for sharing..

  • Debra. on Jun 22, 2009

    A wonderful touching and very meaningful piece. Father’s Day is such an important day and this is a wonderful tribute. Beautifully expressed. A very moving poem, Mel!

  • OhSugar on Jun 22, 2009

    A wonderful appreciation on being a father. Very nicely done.

  • rizzei on Jun 24, 2009

    that’s really touching especially for the fathers out there.:)

  • BC Doan on Jun 25, 2009

    Awesome poem, Melody! It’s so loving..

  • Ruby Hawk on Jun 26, 2009

    That is just beautiful, Well done.

  • Mr Ghaz on Jun 28, 2009

    Excellent!!..well presented poem..I LIKED it..Well done and thanx for sharing..

  • CutestPrincess on Jul 6, 2009

    i really love the way you expressed your love to your father…

  • eddiego65 on Jun 22, 2010

    Lovely tribute!

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