A fairytale short story about a feather, a bird, and giving.

From a bird a feather fell,
its story I shall now tell.
On the ground it did lay,
until upon it I came one day.
For many things I used this feather,
to play on clouds, to dance on thunder.
As a penny to make my wishes,
as a needle to mend stitched.
It was my pen to write such things.
Until one day it was time to go,
back to the dear bird who also loved it so.
I did let this feather go to fly high,
I gave it wind to reach the sky.
Once again one day this feather did fall,
to you it did land,
then this story you shall recall.
My dear feather you may use as a shawl,
to warm the heart,
as you heal all.

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  • warAngel on Dec 29, 2007

    lovely poem so beutiful it was almost as if I was there in the clouds with you.

  • Francie on Dec 29, 2007

    Beautiful poem, loved reading it.

  • Lucy Lockett on Dec 29, 2007

    Very nice, I loved the sentiment of the poem, its very generous.

  • Jared Stenzel on Dec 29, 2007

    Very creative, reminds me of the feathers I’d always find and keep. The thing is, I didn’t let them fly back out.

  • Mary J. Dressel on Jan 4, 2008

    Very nice, Jessica!

    Mary

  • Liane Schmidt on Jan 8, 2008

    This is a very lovely poem. It has a charming, story-telling appeal that was a pleasure to read.

    Best wishes.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

  • miriam ramirez on Jan 18, 2008

    very beautifully written.

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