A sonnet, for my family and friends.

I pen these few lines to leave behind me,
As excuse for all those I shall bear hence,
To express the simple love I owe thee,
That could make such prolong’d argument;
I have journeyed forth to the promised land
Of faith, unwillingly, but unafraid.
I’ll search for the eternal answers, and
Regret only the things I left unsaid;
I have paid the Lord the death He is due,
And found an end to this fragile life’s pain.
With last breath I proclaim my love for you,
And thus defeat death when that love remains.
   Allow these brief words to ease your sadness,
   And embrace this love to restore gladness.

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  • Nadine Millard on Jan 10, 2010

    And, I feel it not just an honour, but a privilige to pen the first comment. I can not remark on why the 34 persons who have read your article prior to myself, liked your work. But, for myself it is a very well thought out piece.

    You have captured your thoughts in nice clear cut lines, and not burdened the reader with deep,dreary contemplation! I felt strangely moved at your choice of wording, as you regret only what you have left unsaid. This may be a lesson to the still living. Never be afraid to tell someone just how much you love them, and never fear saying sorry. It is not a sign of weakness, just the reverse!

    Nadine

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