Poetry – A haiku describing a flashy and racing sports car.

Streaky, speedy, red

The car can slice the night, but

I can’t afford it.

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  • raman13 on Aug 22, 2009

    Good Work

    Interesting

    Best regards

  • Darla Cooke on Aug 22, 2009

    Very nice haiku.

  • Lostash on Aug 22, 2009

    Don’t worry…..I can’t either!!!!!

  • PR Mace on Aug 22, 2009

    I have a red Camry but I can’t afford that car either.

  • Ruby Hawk on Aug 22, 2009

    Lovely, I couldn’t afford it either.It’s all I can do to afford my old Honda.

  • Goodselfme on Aug 22, 2009

    I am a lover of Haiku. Nicely penned one here.TX

  • giftarist on Aug 23, 2009

    Great haiku!

  • Mr Ghaz on Aug 24, 2009

    Nice and great Haiku poem..I loved it. Thanks a lot for sharing.

  • CutestPrincess on Sep 6, 2009

    ice haiku… love that car!!

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