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A Flower in My Hair

Lady Sunshine on Nov 28, 2011
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Just a little love note: a simple, romantic gesture.

Up 
     high,
              upon
                      a
                          sakura 
                                      tree…

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With a gentle,
         loving hand; 
                   rough and callous from battle,
                             places a flower in her hair. 

A delicate blush teases her cheeks,
                with affection in her eyes,
                                      gazing at her warrior.

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Comments (7)
  • papaleng on Nov 28, 2011

    So cute and I like the way you put this one. You are very creative.

  • CHIPMUNK on Nov 28, 2011

    excellent one

  • LoveDoctor on Nov 28, 2011

    Beautiful expression of love. Where has chivarly gone?

  • Erin Miller on Nov 28, 2011

    Beautiful is really all I could say…

  • Shirley Shuler on Nov 28, 2011

    Hi Lady Sunshine, and what a beautiful expression of love it is.

  • Lynn Hollis on Nov 28, 2011

    Very nicely done.

  • Starpisces on Nov 29, 2011

    so lovely and the pattern very fun..

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