About a time in my life when I thought everything was hopeless.

My world is crumbling
from the inside out
I call for you
but there’s no help

My soul is wrenching
can you not hear my shouts?
The voices won’t sink in
theres no way through the fog

I have so many scars on my heart
from the pain you caused
Will they ever be gone?
are my thoughts

The pain is dwindling
as I let it out
I dont have a savior
I have myself

My dreams are my light
their aura leads me to whats right
I look ahead
but briefly behind

It took me sometime
but now I find
Its okay to
reminisce on the old times

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Comments (7)
  • denus on Jan 17, 2009

    good read.

  • Tennessee Thompson on Jan 17, 2009

    Nice poem. Good job.

  • F J McCarthy on Jan 17, 2009

    Very nice work, keep writing.

  • lyndals on Jan 17, 2009

    Very touchin

  • S A JOHNSON on Jan 18, 2009

    Very well written!

  • Mermush on Jan 19, 2009

    hey new view….u speak my mind! good one…

  • hfj on Jan 30, 2009

    Never look back, always look forward. Very nice poem.

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