A Ghost of a Chance

Lady Sunshine on Nov 5, 2009

Tags: Basara, Boo Hoo, ghost, hold, hug, kiss, Kubigiri Basara, relationship, taboo, touch

This relationship was doomed. It would have never worked out.

I want to hold you
I want to touch you
I want to hug you
And kiss you, too
But it cannot be
For it is taboo
Cause I can’t see you
Or even feel you
Since you are a ghost
What a shame, boo hoo!

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I have always been on the outside, looking in, watching the world going by. I fade within the shadows, into the darkness. No one can hear me, no one see me. I am invisible, I am ethereal. I am doomed to wander deep within the night, forever lost, yearning for love, unable to touch. I am an illusion, an figment of the imagination, wanting to become tangible, wanting to exist. I tire living in delusion, of being nothing. I want to come into fruition, to become real. I want to be loved.

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ken bultman on Nov 5, 2009
A poem and a dissertation…both quite nice. Plaintive but nice.
Christine Ramsay on Nov 5, 2009
I enjoyed the read. I like the way it is written.

Christine
cutedrishti8 on Nov 5, 2009
Nice one
Papa Sparks on Nov 5, 2009
Ditto Ken’s comments, Julie. This was quite moving and evocative.
K.Reshma on Nov 5, 2009
Excellent
johnnydod on Nov 5, 2009
Really well written and thought out poem and, with a bonus tract. sunshine one of your best ones yet.
Themax on Nov 5, 2009
Jesus,Please give some power to that ghost
Very nice sharing thank you
Teves on Nov 5, 2009
Nice post sunshine…
Shirley Shuler on Nov 5, 2009
Hi Lady Sunshine, I love this poem, it’s very moving and as always, I love your use of words…
giftarist on Nov 6, 2009
Clever – nice piece!
T. S. GARP on Nov 6, 2009
Brilliant!
fragile18 on Nov 6, 2009
nice one.
Melody SJAL on Nov 7, 2009
Wow, what an emotional piece…lovely!
Lostash on Nov 7, 2009
You certainly don’t need a ‘ghost-writer’!!
deep blue on Nov 7, 2009
I love ghosts and white ladies. Especially ghost writing poetries but I hope this friend I knew will see the sunshine true to her pen name.

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