A Great Holiness Remains to be Seen

Atanacio on Mar 17, 2010

Tags: dark clouds, darkness, sadness, war, weak

God’s dark eyes were somber.

Trails of humanity torn,
history failed to warn,
the young cry,
the old die,
the sick weak,
the times meek,
nothing given, nothing to share,
as the end of days grow near.
The walk was silent
God’s dark eyes were somber,
but through these days he has forgiven,
because humans were weak,
and forgiveness was all they seek,
God’s voice steady and serious,
he inclined his head,
and a great holiness remains to be seen,
by all the living and all the dead.

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sambhafusia on Mar 17, 2010
Great share..keep work on dear..
sambhafusia on Mar 17, 2010
Great share..keep work on dear………
Kakraba Afful on Mar 17, 2010
this is really wise
Christine Ramsay on Mar 17, 2010
An impressive piece. Well done.

Christine
diamondpoet on Mar 17, 2010
Now this is what I am talking about, when your writing impact me my body does the happy dance. This was written with a strong emotion and a power message. You go boy!!!
shivaleen on Mar 17, 2010
Very intresting post
Jimmy Shilaho on Mar 17, 2010
Am humbled, lost for words. It doesn’t get better than this.
yes me on Mar 17, 2010
Wow, you laid this out so well Frank.
cheers
LoveDoctor on Mar 17, 2010
Heartfelt and touching piece.The power of love and forgiveness. It can cure diseases and unite people. It can lead you down the path of physical, emotional and psychological well-being. Keep up the good work Frank:)
standingproud on Mar 19, 2010
I bet god is sad from what he sees
deep blue on Mar 20, 2010
Great flow as always, exacting life’s wonder and anomalies. Well done, Frank.
Evelyn M Carter on Mar 21, 2010
Wow another one! Nice read Frank. I hope your mind isn’t always so deep in thought ~ it get’s so intense. As always thanks for the share.
willie wondka on Apr 12, 2010
great poem.

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