Putrid fumes linger,

like wraithes of sin and sulphur,

in the air cease all.

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  • ashan1614 on Apr 22, 2010

    Love the picture – so very appropriate!

  • lillyrose on Apr 22, 2010

    this would have served as a good haiku for the Iceland volcano too!

  • VTech on Apr 23, 2010

    Nice Post.

  • Parabola on Apr 23, 2010

    a great piece with a huge message most chose to ignore. Well done.

  • rizzei on May 10, 2010

    simple but opens my mind to reality. nice^_^

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